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I Rocked It

Birthday gifts for my love are a ring and a Bouquet... each flower a perfect red rose Halfway to her house, I smiled because it's Friday! I'll bend on one knee and propose. Knocked on her door and she was surprised, Shocked to see me kneeling before her. Locked in my arms, she said, "I love you." Rocked it! "Yes," she cried in a whisper. June 13, 2021 Lento Contest ~ sponsored by Joseph May

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/5/2021 9:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful and romantic story/write. What a birthday gift. Loved the ending, "Rocked it! "Yes," she cried in a whisper." Have a blessed day writing away...........

Jan Allison

Date: 7/5/2021 6:03:00 AM

Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/5/2021 7:17:00 AM

After seeing 11 people awarded first place finishes (is that even a contest?), I guess 2nd place didn't rock it quite as much. haha ah well.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/4/2021 9:51:00 PM

Beautiful. Congratulations!

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/5/2021 7:14:00 AM

Thank you, Chris.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/22/2021 11:37:00 PM

Lovely and romantic write, Jenna, you picked some difficult rhyming, yet it flows beautifully:)

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/23/2021 11:10:00 AM

Thanks a lot, Jo.

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/15/2021 6:50:00 AM

Hi Jenna, This is a lovely and well-written entry for the contest. I found it romantic as well. Best wishes for the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/16/2021 6:44:00 AM

Thanks so very much!

Mark Koplin

Date: 6/14/2021 7:15:00 AM

Well done Jenna, beautiful!

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/14/2021 9:31:00 AM

Thank you, Mark. I had more time off than usual this last week, so did a lot of contest writing, but there's no competitiveness left in me. Life can be a roller coaster ride. I haven't seen you in a while...great to see you.

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 6/13/2021 8:56:00 PM

Who could say no to such a proposal. Great lento, Jenna. Based on fact??

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/14/2021 9:29:00 AM

Fictional, Reason. Thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 6/13/2021 1:33:00 PM

Such a lovely romantic piece Jenna penned so well and hope you win the contest. Blessings, Gordon

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/14/2021 9:29:00 AM

Thanks Gordon. It's gotten to the point where contest placements really don't matter anymore. Those who care about the winner's list enter Brian's plethora of contests that he seems to have several times a week. I don't agree with his way of doing things so I no longer bother with his, thus, I've fallen on the list and that's fine.