I Resolve

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Contest: Funny New Years Resolutions for 2024 Sponsor: Constance La France

27 December 2023

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I’ll drink no more
I’ll smoke no more
I’ll swear no more my friends
I shall do these things no more
The day this old year ends

I’ll hate no more
Be late no more
Or gamble any more
Once a brand new year has put its foot inside my door

All these things I’ve done before
But I’m prepared to guess
Though I won’t do them any more
I shall not do them less

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Beata Agustin

Date: 1/1/2024 12:09:00 AM

Congrats. Thanks for sharing this. Joyous New year to you and your family. God bless you.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/31/2023 1:46:00 PM

Back with Congratulations with your win. I enjoyed reading your creative/fun write/great ending again. Happy New Year... Write More In 24..........................

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 12/31/2023 9:51:00 AM

Awesomeness and my favorite of those I've read/ heard! Congratulations! :) Still laughing...Linda :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/28/2023 1:30:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your creative write/great ending. Good Luck in the contest... "Happy New Year 2024".................

Deb M

Date: 12/27/2023 12:34:00 PM

Sounds familiar Terry….fun write my funny friend!! Debx

Terry Flood
Date: 12/27/2023 2:12:00 PM

I heard you the first time, Deb. Ha ha… don’t you just hate it when that happens? Thanks though ;-) Terry

Deb M

Date: 12/27/2023 12:25:00 PM

Sounds familiar Terry….fun write my funny friend!! Debx

Lin Lane

Date: 12/26/2023 4:40:00 PM

Status quo on resolutions. I’d expect nothing more or less from you, Terry. ;-)

Terry Flood
Date: 12/26/2023 4:45:00 PM

Thanks, Lin. I wrote the bones of this a year ago for a similar contest but wasn’t too sure about it. Suddenly I’m struggling for ideas so, I dug it up, brushed it down, gave it a tweak here and there and set it free. Glad you enjoyed. Hope you had a stupendous Christmas. Terry