I Remove All My Clothing Yet I Am Not Naked

Skating fingers criss-cross, glide down my neck;
Under my clothing feel free to check
For a zipper, a button - my body serene,
It’s far beneath my skin the treasure unseen.

Why do you fumble and why with such need
Do you remove all my clothing longing to see
Bare hips so to know me?
Bare back so to know me?
Or pink candy stars soft on my breast
So to impress on your mind my complete nakedness?

I do not stand Revealed, though bare is my skin,
I do not stand Exposed, to believe so is sin.
You have removed only waves which accent the sea;
You cannot fathom the depth of the ocean in me.

See my hips – you do not know my rhythm.
See my back – you do not know my strength.
See my stars – you do not know my dreams:

Go ahead, touch me, I am not Naked
Well hidden are my seams.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 4:16 PM
A powerful poem, Krystal. The meaning was well crafted in this delightful yet truthful poem. This is going in my faves for sure. Excellent debut poem. Great line too ... you cannot fathom the depth of the ocean in me. Sparkling imagery. You are a very talented poetess. Much love and joy to you. RW
Cochrane Avatar
November 18, 2016 at 1:57 PM
Thank you for your kind words Freddie, it made my day reading your comments. Much joy and love to you too.
Oloidi Avatar
August 19, 2012 at 5:01 AM
Woah! What a mind blowing title and poem.I like! I like! I tried removing my cloth in front of my ex-love,thinking I was not naked,but yet she ran off the room, with full speed! I wonder why? Lol. keep up d sweet write! Kingfemi
Cochrane Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 9:12 AM
Thank you :)
Brisson Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 12:24 PM
I love this poem.
Fraser Avatar
September 25, 2009 at 3:21 PM
Wonderful write Krystal, it's been a joy to read your poetry>>James
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