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still it hovers about clutters my mind clouding my heart so tell me why i'm at a loss i'm frozen transfixed caught in time left hanging suspended in the limbo of not knowing of seeking answers of searching for a key a key with implied powers powers to unlock secrets secrets that hold me back back to places I've forgotten forgotten yet mere dormant its pulse still in synchronicity in harmony with the gentle rhythm of a melody that resonates in my heart Posted on September 29, 2024

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Date: 10/10/2024 7:24:00 PM
Like a wound that will heal, but there is always something that remains, some type of scar. A strong close with that last stanza. I loved this poem.
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Date: 10/12/2024 6:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Rob ~
Date: 10/7/2024 8:03:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your beautiful poem.
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Date: 10/7/2024 6:31:00 PM
Thank you very much, Karen ~
Date: 9/29/2024 10:13:00 PM
B.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l.
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Date: 9/30/2024 5:47:00 AM
Ahh... what a lovely comment. Have a fabulous day !
Date: 9/29/2024 10:20:00 AM
a very emotional poem.
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Date: 10/4/2024 10:52:00 AM
Thank you very much, Mike ~

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