i remember when i left

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still it hovers about
clutters my mind
clouding my heart so

tell me why i'm at a loss
i'm frozen transfixed
caught in time

left hanging suspended
in the limbo of not knowing
of seeking answers

of searching for a key
a key with implied powers
powers to unlock secrets

secrets that hold me back
back to places I've forgotten
forgotten yet mere dormant

its pulse still in synchronicity
in harmony with the gentle rhythm
of a melody that resonates in my heart



AP: 3rd place 2025

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 10/10/2024 7:24:00 PM
Like a wound that will heal, but there is always something that remains, some type of scar. A strong close with that last stanza. I loved this poem.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/12/2024 6:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Rob ~
Date: 10/7/2024 8:03:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your beautiful poem.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/7/2024 6:31:00 PM
Thank you very much, Karen ~
Date: 9/29/2024 10:13:00 PM
B.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/30/2024 5:47:00 AM
Ahh... what a lovely comment. Have a fabulous day !
Date: 9/29/2024 10:20:00 AM
a very emotional poem.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/4/2024 10:52:00 AM
Thank you very much, Mike ~
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