I Remember When
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I just loved watching a firework display,
to my young ears- those loud gunfire and booms;
could feel excitement climb with each array,
smell sulphur in falling fountain like plumes.
To my young ears those loud gunfire and booms,
felt palpations from the atomic storm;
smell sulphur in falling fountain like plumes,
and stared at each wild colored floating form.
Felt palpations from the atomic storm,
could feel excitement climb with each array;
and stared at each wild colored floating form,
I just loved watching a firework display !
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December 30, 2020
Poetry/Pantoum/I Remember When
Copyright Protected, ID 12-1317-482-30
All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France
Written for the Standard contest, Fireworks
sponsor, Eve Roper, Judged 02/03/2021
First Place
Copyright © Constance La France | Year Posted 2020
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