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I Remember. . . .. I remember how my insides fluttered at the brush of your lips like a hundred tiny hummingbirds. I remember your smell the taste of your skin delicious and intoxicating. I remember the contours of your face your smile and how your mouth made me wet with desire. But most of all, I remember that place in the small of your back where my hands would go when you held me close. And I remember then, how I loved you.

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Date: 4/5/2015 11:28:00 PM
Gail, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA
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Date: 10/8/2014 1:14:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Gail- I choose your first lovely and very well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Gail Roberts
Date: 10/15/2014 5:19:00 PM
Thank you, Anne for welcoming me and commenting. I have no idea what I'm doing so feel free to comment/criticize as you will. I have read some of your offerings and am blown away.
Date: 10/7/2014 4:44:00 PM
Gail,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Gail Roberts
Date: 10/15/2014 5:21:00 PM
Thank you for your warm welcome. It has taken me this long just to figure out how to reply to comments. I have read some of your offerings and loved them. Have no idea what I'm doing so feel free to comment/criticize as you wish.
Date: 10/7/2014 4:01:00 PM
A very beautiful romantic poem Gail.
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Gail Roberts
Date: 10/15/2014 5:22:00 PM
Thank you Brenda. Sorry not to have responded before, but I'm just now beginning to figure out how to reply.

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