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dad's work shed to this day, the scent of wood and dust in the air; the cobwebs in corners and crooks, sun flooding in through windows . . . His scarred and scored wooden work table, and the countless tin cans of nails and screws. And dad working on a new plan, his coffee cup forgotten and ignored; and I would bring him flowers . . . Precious dandelions, buttercups and daisies, which he would place in a container of some sort. Smiling, he would lift me up to sit beside him, and we would ponder his scribbled sketches; oh the grand ideas he had . . . I still have those doodles and outlines, I look at them sometimes and recall. How the lazy afternoon would pass, for me and dad; and later we would sit on the rusty porch swing, side by side, just swinging. __________________________ April 4, 2013 - edit Poetry/Verse/I Remember Copyright Protected, ID 13-1122-224-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Wk2, March 2019 sponsor, Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 3/11/2019 10:56:00 AM
Dear Heart, I can see you and your Dad. And smell all you mentioned. What a knockout poem.wow! Panagiota
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Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2019 5:26:00 PM
Panagiota, thanks for visiting and for seeing and feeling the love ~
Date: 3/11/2019 9:50:00 AM
Nicely done, DH, quite lovely in the love you portray --congrats on your win in Brian's contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2019 5:13:00 PM
LJ, thanks for the lovely comment and congrats, yes there was a lot of love ~
Date: 3/11/2019 8:27:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Constance.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2019 5:11:00 PM
Line, thanks for visiting with the congrats ~
Date: 3/11/2019 8:12:00 AM
Touching, so touching. Everyone should have had a father like that. Moments that became poems.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2019 5:09:00 PM
Greg, thanks for visiting with that compassionate comment, yes I had a very special bond with my father, but I had to let him go one day, I held his cold hand and never wanted to let it go ~
Date: 3/8/2019 2:46:00 PM
writing like a picture : )
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Constance La France
Date: 3/8/2019 6:42:00 PM
Sand, thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate ~

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