I Recall

So Many special moments in my mind
for some of them I have really pined
remembering those I have left behind
I can recall with clarity those declined

Special places that became entwined
in the canvas of my mind now redefined
I revisit with glee places enshrined 
and recall magical moments that unwind

Outlined in gold in my mind defined
I walk and recall the ones  I refined
people lost with who I wish to rebind
recalling some for who I once repined

Our lives are full of memories signed
and dated as they rattle in the wind
flashing past so fast they become twined
and stay as I recall them all to my mind

written 10/20/2013

contest: I Recall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/21/2013 10:40:00 AM
Wow you have me all wound up with this one. A great entry for the contest.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/21/2013 10:41:00 AM
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Date: 10/20/2013 1:19:00 PM
Very very nice shadow..good luck.....:-)
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/20/2013 2:19:00 PM
hi Donna ty for your time reviewing Shadow x smile
Date: 10/20/2013 9:12:00 AM
Beautiful poem on remembrance of near and dear ones. I feel it as the golden passion of love, my nice friend. Lovely done. Loved always, bl
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/20/2013 12:56:00 PM
Ty BL I treasure your review Shadow x smile
Date: 10/20/2013 8:10:00 AM
Full of good rhymes..Enjoyed reading this one today...Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments are uplifting..Sara
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/20/2013 8:15:00 AM
hi Sara Ty I am very happy you like it Shadow x smile
Date: 10/20/2013 8:10:00 AM
Nice memories recalling with lovely rhymes, Richard
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/20/2013 8:14:00 AM
hi Richard Ty for reading and nice review Shadow x smile
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