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I Really Wish You Could See

I really wish you could see, how much you have hurt me. I cry day and night, just wishing we would stop these fights. I just want us back to the way we use to be, when it was just you and me. We were like Bonnie and Clyde, I was always down to ride. Never once left your side, I was even there when you cried. You will always have my heart, now lets begin today with a brand new start. I'm going to end this with I love you, and I really hope you feel the same way too.

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Skat A

Date: 5/5/2016 1:10:00 AM

reading this a second time, Jacqueline. skat

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/24/2016 10:27:00 AM

nice to read this poem again ***pd

Viv Wigley

Date: 5/24/2015 10:30:00 PM

Hi, Jaquline. A soft, lachrymose start to your time here on poetry soup. Lovely verse. Welcome. Hope you enjoy your time here with like minded souls. Viv x

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/19/2015 10:02:00 AM

Jaquline, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 5/18/2015 10:40:00 AM

Jacquline, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Jacqueline Cox

Date: 5/17/2015 6:49:00 PM

Thank you everyone for your comments, I have been writing poetry for a long time now but I would still like it if ya'll could give me some things that I may need to work on. I'm always up for learning more about writing poetry because it something I really enjoy doing. Thank you...

Jan Allison

Date: 5/17/2015 12:00:00 PM

I hope he opens his eyes and sees before it is too late:-( Hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/17/2015 11:59:00 AM

- Congratulations on your first poems here at P-Soup - A pleasure to welcome you, Jacqueline :) - Hope you will find this page interesting and post many more thoughts and words in the future - Good luck :) - // Anne-Lise :)