I Quit

It's time I admit that I am a quitter 
No longer, am I, a cigarette sitter
The stick, I flung
To save some lung
And now I am abnormally bitter

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Pat Adams

Date: 8/16/2017 12:38:00 AM

I smoked for 30 years and now can't believe I started in the first place. Hang in there. It really is worth it!! Great rhyme. Great poem! rPAT

Dean Wood

Date: 8/9/2017 10:31:00 AM

Congratulations Anna! I like this little Limerick. I'll stay out of your way for a while just in case. hehe, Dean

Michael Tor

Date: 8/4/2017 10:03:00 AM

Cancer kills, they make them addicting and expensive good luck in quitting.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 8/3/2017 12:27:00 PM

LOL way to go girl! Awsome write, I'm so with ya, quit for New Year's resolve. Congratulations:) xomo!

Anna Hopper
Date: 8/4/2017 8:48:00 AM

Thank you!