I Put a Spell On You -Alisa's Version

Verse1

I put a spell on you

Did you feel how I did it?

I tried to be the best for you

Did you feel what I felt?

I was still a kid,

I think, you did admit it

I had a desire to

Be liked by you

 

pre-chorus

So I’m afraid you have no clue

Who is with you? What is my colour for true?

 

chorus

My nightmare is you decide to go

Claiming that I was a fake in all

I tried to be ideal girl, hiding my flaws

I shouldn’t played with life, I know

I was deeply in love with you, I hoped

sometimes it could be forced

because
 I thought that you were mine



verse

I put a spell on you

I shouldn’t have done it (have done it)

But I was so selfish in

My wills and my dreams

I tried to change the fate (poor fate)

Decided “it’s just a game”

thought  “there’s no other way”

Be liked by you

 

pre-chorus

So I’m afraid you have no clue

Who is with you? What is my colour for true?



 chorus

My nightmare is you decide to go

Claiming that I was a fake in all

I tried to be ideal girl, hiding my flaws

I shouldn’t played with life, I know

I was deeply in love with you, I hoped

sometimes it could be forced
because 
I thought that you were mine


There is a song "I put a spell on you" by Screaming Jay Hawkins. I was so amazed by the lyrics, the voice and the music , that I decided to write a story from the woman's perspective.
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Date: 4/26/2025 10:57:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/24/2022 10:26:00 AM
I also liked Jay Hawkins song.., Music is universal Panagiota Romios USA
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