I Ponder

Looking up to the sky
I thought of the wind
Of how the wind looks
Clouds are always seen
So are I wonder of the wind
How the wind would look
There are many clouds
One special cloud odd
A cloud different from others
This cloud is rounded shape
With a face and curly top
The eyes express anger
When the cloud begins 
Blowing a strong wind
It makes trees dance fast
Making the grass sway
The sound of the strong wind
is heard blowing all night 
Fromthe special odd cloud
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Dome Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 10:05 AM
Lovely and so visual. Love clouds, well expressed. Pete.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 11:39 AM
Hello Peter Dome, I love the clouds to. You never know what you see n the clouds. Darlene
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November 4, 2020 at 4:30 PM
Hi Darlene, this poem gives the reader something to ponder, it’s strange that we can’t see the wind - only feel it. Sometimes rough, sometimes soft, sometimes just coming in gusts. An inspirational write my friend... Belle
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November 6, 2020 at 11:43 AM
Hi Belle, I vision a cloud with a face eyes and mouth. Blowing wind sometimes gentle, sometimes rough, or a gust. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.
Lee Sr. Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 4:07 AM
As God is our breath he places in our chest you ponder well my friend I see what you see God's beauty~
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 6:01 AM
Hello Edward, I hope that you are well and doing fine. I hope all is well with you. Thank you for the lovely comment. my friend enjoy your day.
Deepa Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 12:09 PM
I still wonder about all these dear Darlene mam.. Such a beautiful imagism poetry that you have created.Keep inspiring and keep writing.Best wishes and love to you:-)
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 4:23 PM
Hello Deepa, thank you Deepa. I will keep on creating poetry. It is snowing her tonight. the whole ground is covered with snow. Winter is here. Love best wishes Darlene
Rodrigues Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 11:54 AM
That “different” cloud with a round shape and curly top, expressive anger, strong wind spurring tree dance and grass sway...ooh love this! Fave for me, sweet lady!
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 2:58 PM
Hello Kim, i have wondered what the wind looked liked So I vision a cloud with a curly top blowing wind. yes this cloud expressed anger. Hugs Darlene
Callus Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 11:59 PM
Happy wondering and pondering Darlene! That is one sure way of creating poetry! And nature certainly can be a perfect source for inspiration. Regards // pau
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 7:17 AM
Hello Paul, I get many ideas from nature. also from dreams. Or things happening around me. Regards Darlene.
One Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 12:25 PM
Hope you are ok my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 7:20 AM
Helo Silent One, hi! It is nice to see you. yes I am fine thankyou. It is Autumn here, raking leaves that have fallen. So far 23 bags of leaves done. More to do. Enjoy your day my friend.
Romios Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 8:43 AM
Deep thoughs Darlene Well penned. Pangie
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 11:24 AM
Hello Panagiota ,yes deep thoughts. Hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo
Rigoler Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 10:30 AM
Bonjour Darlene. When I was a boy a favorite passtime was comparing clouds to other things, like flowers, trees, and even faces. Clouds of course contribute to earth's ecology. Thank you for reading my work. / Maurice
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October 23, 2020 at 2:51 AM
- Always something to wonder about ... nature's miracles, Darlene :) - Lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 9:45 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile, yes there is always something to wonder about. Hugs Sunshine Smile. Thank you for the lovely comment. hugs Darlene.
Laurie Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 5:17 PM
Hello Darlene … your verse certainly makes me think about this quirk of nature that I’ve never thought about before - thank you Darlene - Lindsay
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 9:47 AM
Hello Laurie, I have always wondered about it. Your welcome my friend. Enjoy your day my friend.
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October 22, 2020 at 3:32 PM
A wonderful write. I ponder many things. I think that is what poets do. I love the sky by day and by night. Enjoy your day writing away...............
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 5:57 AM
Hello Paula Goldsmith, thank you Paula, It was a fun write. i always look art the clouds. The sky always changes. Enjoy your day my friend.
Sands Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 10:44 AM
I felt like I was right there, seeing it all Darlene. I love looking at the sky. Well written. I hope you have a nice day :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 12:57 PM
Hello Heidi, oh -how nice for you to tell me. i love the clouds. Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs Darlene
Wolf Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 6:03 PM
The wind and the cloud -- The Odd Couple, perhaps?! Have a pleasant evening, Darlene! Sweetness and Light, Gershon
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 5:10 AM
Hello Gershon, yes the odd couple. Good morning enjoy your day my friend. Thank you for the sweetness and light.
Y. Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 3:38 PM
Hi Darlene , I ponder to, you’ve penned a good poem about pondering. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 6:02 PM
Hello alexis Y I always ponder. Thank you Alexis, enjoy you evenig my friend.
One Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 10:55 AM
Lovely ponderings... A poet will always ponder... Have a lovely day.
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October 20, 2020 at 2:59 PM
Hello Silent One, thank you Silent One. i always ponder. Enjoy your evening my ffriend.
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