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Looking up to the sky I thought of the wind Of how the wind looks Clouds are always seen So are I wonder of the wind How the wind would look There are many clouds One special cloud odd A cloud different from others This cloud is rounded shape With a face and curly top The eyes express anger When the cloud begins Blowing a strong wind It makes trees dance fast Making the grass sway The sound of the strong wind is heard blowing all night Fromthe special odd cloud

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Date: 11/6/2020 10:05:00 AM
Lovely and so visual. Love clouds, well expressed. Pete.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/6/2020 11:39:00 AM
Hello Peter Dome, I love the clouds to. You never know what you see n the clouds. Darlene
Date: 11/4/2020 4:30:00 PM
Hi Darlene, this poem gives the reader something to ponder, it’s strange that we can’t see the wind - only feel it. Sometimes rough, sometimes soft, sometimes just coming in gusts. An inspirational write my friend... Belle
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Date: 11/6/2020 11:43:00 AM
Hi Belle, I vision a cloud with a face eyes and mouth. Blowing wind sometimes gentle, sometimes rough, or a gust. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 11/4/2020 4:07:00 AM
As God is our breath he places in our chest you ponder well my friend I see what you see God's beauty~
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Date: 11/4/2020 6:01:00 AM
Hello Edward, I hope that you are well and doing fine. I hope all is well with you. Thank you for the lovely comment. my friend enjoy your day.
Date: 11/1/2020 12:09:00 PM
I still wonder about all these dear Darlene mam.. Such a beautiful imagism poetry that you have created.Keep inspiring and keep writing.Best wishes and love to you:-)
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Date: 11/1/2020 4:23:00 PM
Hello Deepa, thank you Deepa. I will keep on creating poetry. It is snowing her tonight. the whole ground is covered with snow. Winter is here. Love best wishes Darlene
Date: 10/29/2020 11:54:00 AM
That “different” cloud with a round shape and curly top, expressive anger, strong wind spurring tree dance and grass sway...ooh love this! Fave for me, sweet lady!
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Date: 10/29/2020 2:58:00 PM
Hello Kim, i have wondered what the wind looked liked So I vision a cloud with a curly top blowing wind. yes this cloud expressed anger. Hugs Darlene
Date: 10/25/2020 11:59:00 PM
Happy wondering and pondering Darlene! That is one sure way of creating poetry! And nature certainly can be a perfect source for inspiration. Regards // pau
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Date: 10/26/2020 7:17:00 AM
Hello Paul, I get many ideas from nature. also from dreams. Or things happening around me. Regards Darlene.
Date: 10/25/2020 12:25:00 PM
Hope you are ok my friend.
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Date: 10/26/2020 7:20:00 AM
Helo Silent One, hi! It is nice to see you. yes I am fine thankyou. It is Autumn here, raking leaves that have fallen. So far 23 bags of leaves done. More to do. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 10/24/2020 8:43:00 AM
Deep thoughs Darlene Well penned. Pangie
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Date: 10/24/2020 11:24:00 AM
Hello Panagiota ,yes deep thoughts. Hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo
Date: 10/23/2020 10:30:00 AM
Bonjour Darlene. When I was a boy a favorite passtime was comparing clouds to other things, like flowers, trees, and even faces. Clouds of course contribute to earth's ecology. Thank you for reading my work. / Maurice
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Date: 10/23/2020 2:51:00 AM
- Always something to wonder about ... nature's miracles, Darlene :) - Lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/23/2020 9:45:00 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile, yes there is always something to wonder about. Hugs Sunshine Smile. Thank you for the lovely comment. hugs Darlene.
Date: 10/22/2020 5:17:00 PM
Hello Darlene … your verse certainly makes me think about this quirk of nature that I’ve never thought about before - thank you Darlene - Lindsay
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Date: 10/23/2020 9:47:00 AM
Hello Laurie, I have always wondered about it. Your welcome my friend. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 10/22/2020 3:32:00 PM
A wonderful write. I ponder many things. I think that is what poets do. I love the sky by day and by night. Enjoy your day writing away...............
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/23/2020 5:57:00 AM
Hello Paula Goldsmith, thank you Paula, It was a fun write. i always look art the clouds. The sky always changes. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 10/22/2020 10:44:00 AM
I felt like I was right there, seeing it all Darlene. I love looking at the sky. Well written. I hope you have a nice day :)
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Date: 10/22/2020 12:57:00 PM
Hello Heidi, oh -how nice for you to tell me. i love the clouds. Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs Darlene
Date: 10/21/2020 6:03:00 PM
The wind and the cloud -- The Odd Couple, perhaps?! Have a pleasant evening, Darlene! Sweetness and Light, Gershon
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Date: 10/22/2020 5:10:00 AM
Hello Gershon, yes the odd couple. Good morning enjoy your day my friend. Thank you for the sweetness and light.
Date: 10/20/2020 3:38:00 PM
Hi Darlene , I ponder to, you’ve penned a good poem about pondering. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/20/2020 6:02:00 PM
Hello alexis Y I always ponder. Thank you Alexis, enjoy you evenig my friend.
Date: 10/20/2020 10:55:00 AM
Lovely ponderings... A poet will always ponder... Have a lovely day.
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Date: 10/20/2020 2:59:00 PM
Hello Silent One, thank you Silent One. i always ponder. Enjoy your evening my ffriend.

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