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I Picked Up a Marble

I was walking a dark path Among black trees Time always running Careless and mysterious I was running, towards nowhere, Without meaning, without will I flew and fell again and again Over a dark and invisible ravine Then, I picked up a marble A translucent colored glass I gazed unwittingly through it Unable to close my eye A sensation, new and unknown A different world Went straight through the marble Was it just confusion? But suddenly black became white Impossible became possible A pale smile appeared. A flame of hope was born.

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Date: 3/30/2013 4:31:00 PM
Patrizia, this endures a good flowing verse, enjoyed your poem. Many Blessings with your Featured Poem of the week. By the way no matter my blue color or tune I am always here, spreading the colorful cheer.....Happy Easter!" xox~ LINDA
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Date: 3/25/2013 4:05:00 PM
Congrats Patrizia on your dramatic monologue being featured.
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Date: 3/19/2012 4:50:00 PM
Interesting way to depict a transition from aimlessness to hope. Like your upbeat ending. Favorite lines "black became white" "Impossible became possible"
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