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I Open My Eyes

we dance you and I to our favourite song beneath a starlit sky you gently take me by the hand just you and I upon the sand and dance me to the end of love I open my eyes you are gone written 12th July 2021 Contest Bite size poem number 12 Sponsor Line Gauthier 4TH PLACE Contest A STRAND 1057 Sponsor Brian Strand FIRST PLACE

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/24/2022 11:55:00 AM

I have read your work that is on the winners' list and find it worthy of the placement. Congrats..Sara

Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/8/2022 11:56:00 PM

Bless you Sara with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/24/2022 5:49:00 AM

A lovely, emotive write, Ann! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M

Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/8/2022 11:55:00 PM

Many thanks dear Kim ~ with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/23/2022 7:01:00 AM

Great Bite. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/8/2022 11:55:00 PM

Thank you so much Christuraj with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/15/2021 10:45:00 AM

Congratulations. I could feel your pain in this poem. May God bless you with peace

Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/24/2021 5:07:00 AM

Bless you Rama for your kind words xx

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/15/2021 4:13:00 AM

Beautiful. congratulations!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/24/2021 5:06:00 AM

Many thanks Christuraj xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/12/2021 11:32:00 PM

Sad in a way. But have courage and smile at dreams. Hugs.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/24/2021 5:06:00 AM

Bless you Victor and thank you xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/12/2021 2:34:00 PM

A beautiful dream Ann, he lives on in your heart and mind. Tom

Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/12/2021 2:57:00 PM

Bless you dear Tom and thank you for your kind words. With kindest thoughts Ann x

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/12/2021 12:56:00 PM

Hello Ann Gilmour, I felt part of this poem until he was gone and wondered where he went, Hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/13/2021 3:47:00 PM

Hello Ann Gilmore, a dream, for your darling husband. Oh he died in 2008. My husband died in 2016. I have a question i want to ask him but i will not get an answer. Oh-well. With kindness and thoughts Darlene xx

Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/12/2021 1:16:00 PM

It was all a dream Darlene, for my darling husband died in 2008 and I still miss him so... Thank you Darlene for your visit my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx