Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

- I Need You -

I have sweet thoughts
                                       The thoughts goes to you
                                       My tears comforted by you
                               The pleasure is great when I have you
                             The delights you give me when I'm happy
                                My eyes sparkle when I look at you
                                        My mouth runs in water
                                        I just have to taste you
                                           My own love and sin                        
                                          Only by a small touch
                                        Feel my lips cools down
                                   A sprinkling of chocolate on top
                                    My delicious vanilla ice cream
                                          I need you ... NOW!





13.08.2013
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Owen Van Der Schyf April 7, 2016 at 6:56 AM You think it goes one way then it turns. Imaginative Anne-Lise Andresen April 7, 2016 at 8:43 AM - Thanks for the visit and comments, Owen - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Archana Garg January 15, 2014 at 6:30 AM Anne its very sweet of you. The way tou turned after sixth line is superb... !! 'I need you ... NOW!'--is really real... I enjoyed it from the begining to end. :)) Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2014 at 6:40 AM - Highly appreciate your visit and comments - Thank you, Archana ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Ludden September 20, 2013 at 9:47 AM The element of surprise is always a winner! Anne-Lise Andresen September 20, 2013 at 9:50 AM - Thanks for the visit and comments,Robert. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Wilfred Aniagyei September 4, 2013 at 7:36 AM Wow! Exposing the feeling buried within every soul Anne-Lise Andresen September 4, 2013 at 7:56 AM - Thanks for the visit and comments, Wilfred. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid August 30, 2013 at 3:12 AM A VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE Anne-Lise Andresen August 30, 2013 at 5:22 AM - Thanks for the visit and comments, Liam. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Remelan Nepomuceno August 29, 2013 at 6:35 AM Rhetorical! I liked it. Anne-Lise Andresen August 29, 2013 at 6:41 AM - Remelan, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Nair August 24, 2013 at 11:37 AM It's when you melt down/ That i start/ This flow is sure an art/ The designs it weaves/ These eyes' in for a treat/ The ice cream was just/ A passing part/ Anne-Lise Andresen August 24, 2013 at 11:42 AM - Vijay, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock August 20, 2013 at 4:25 PM Mmmm sounds yummy and sexy the same time. I want some of that. LOL Nicely written Anne Lise. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen August 21, 2013 at 3:10 AM - Phyllis, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu August 20, 2013 at 2:09 AM Now I want some Vanilla. Sweet. Anne-Lise Andresen August 20, 2013 at 2:23 AM - Alozor Michael, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway August 19, 2013 at 11:28 AM Yummy!!! can I have it? I think I need it also :) thanks for this very delicious poem of yours friend Anne. Very creative. Have a great day always. Hugs, :) Anne-Lise Andresen August 19, 2013 at 11:34 AM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Maria, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Carrie Richards August 16, 2013 at 10:42 AM mmmmmmm----------delicious in every way....in metaphor or reality.....I love it!! Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2013 at 10:53 AM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Carrie, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Christine Phillips August 16, 2013 at 6:49 AM It nice to know that you have cherished these wonderful feelings. They are evident in your writings. Life is not all well and rosy for others...I live in a realistic world and observed and experience daily happenings. I always enjoy reading your love poems. If that's what's keep you glowing...keep shining my dear. Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2013 at 7:10 AM - Even if the world is not a happy and rosy ..... I like to be "happy" in my poems - Spread joy and forget the sorrow ...- Thanks for your visit and your comments Christine, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Terry O'Leary August 15, 2013 at 4:17 PM Ohhh... your words make my mouth water for ice cream and... for you ;-) A poem of longing... wonderful... Terry (and thank you, Anne Lise, for your kind comments) Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2013 at 1:26 AM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Terry, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams August 15, 2013 at 3:49 PM I love this one both front and backwards, it flows perfectly...a playful yet romantic poem...I suddenly want ice-cream :) Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2013 at 1:26 AM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Sandra, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich August 15, 2013 at 2:47 PM very cute and romantic passion play!! Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2013 at 1:25 AM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Andrea, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud August 15, 2013 at 1:13 PM i'll have cookies and cream ice-cream for friday, anne.... i NEED to.. happy day and thanks for coming around...:) huggs Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2013 at 1:25 AM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Nette, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Carol Eastman August 15, 2013 at 12:25 PM Ahh a Great passion poem... Anne-Lise Andresen August 15, 2013 at 12:39 PM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Carol, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ravindra K Kapoor August 15, 2013 at 11:27 AM You have beautifully revealed in this passionate write the feelings of a carving body and mind, more so as you have given a flavor of ice-cream and chocolate also. Sweet Poem Anne on the need of Love and its feelings. Love and best wishes ...Ravindra…Anne L A Anne-Lise Andresen August 15, 2013 at 11:32 AM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Ravindra, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu August 15, 2013 at 11:12 AM Wow! Awesome! I love it! Anne-Lise Andresen August 15, 2013 at 11:19 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Alozor. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kim Van Breda August 15, 2013 at 8:31 AM Wonderful-- starting off as a passionate love scenario-- that love evolving to the decadent but delicious chocolate ice cream. Great write as always. Xx Anne-Lise Andresen August 15, 2013 at 9:50 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Kim. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan August 15, 2013 at 8:22 AM I love the sprinkling of chocolate on top of vanilla ice cream. A very romantic image... Jack Anne-Lise Andresen August 15, 2013 at 9:50 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Jack - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Red Fiery August 15, 2013 at 6:32 AM I love vanilla and I loved this delicious poem..:) My dear Anne ur words are always admired ..ur too sweet ....cheers ! Anne-Lise Andresen August 15, 2013 at 6:42 AM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Red, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May August 15, 2013 at 4:55 AM I enjoyed this wonderful write Anne....the ending was sweet....hugs Anne-Lise Andresen August 15, 2013 at 5:02 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Joseph. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam August 15, 2013 at 4:45 AM " I need you" Very refreshing write. Enjoyed. Tfs Anne-Lise Andresen August 15, 2013 at 4:54 AM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Ravi, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Asokumar Panangad August 15, 2013 at 12:24 AM How cleverly words used! Good Anne, I enjoyed the reading of it. ASOKUMAR Anne-Lise Andresen August 15, 2013 at 1:46 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Asokumar. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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