I Need Thee

when did i first learn that i needed thee
oh that terrible day i spent with out thee
i was like a ship in a desert
as useless as i was wasted feeling came over me
a fish out of water flopping around
with no way to reach water
all i could do was drown backwards
a man in the desert, many days without water
coming to realize
the uselessness of all the worlds riches
the poor child on Christmas Eve
who's parents pockets were empty
yet his heart full of wishes
images of miracles so true in the movies
and in less than 24 hours
his parents night mare arrive
oh sad day and woe is me
for the day i find that i've lost thee
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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December 22, 2009 at 3:28 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Best wishes and much success in your writing endeavors. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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December 21, 2009 at 11:38 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week John, Merry Christmas to you >> James
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December 21, 2009 at 11:16 AM
Hi John, Oh so heartfelt, emotional. Congrats on your poem being featured this week!! Very well deserved. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours. May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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December 20, 2009 at 10:01 AM
Congrats on your featured poem of the week from the Soup... happy Sunday..
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December 1, 2009 at 8:30 PM
This is nice but sad.
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