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I Need More Than An Suv

Though few drive off-road in their truck Pick-up owners have run amok Having a tail gate Their mood will elate While the cabin carries a schmuck Author's note: A pass to those folks who use their truck for business on a regular basis. However, a status truck reveals a weak mind and hurts the environment more than a "normal" car. Those are already bad enough.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2024 5:03:00 PM

funny. I love that word schmuck.

Duke Beaufort
Date: 1/24/2024 5:12:00 PM

Well, it rhymes with truck....as do some other words, but this worked out just right. I am always looking for a way to bring some laughs.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2024 5:03:00 PM

thanks for the sweet comments you left me

Duke Beaufort
Date: 1/24/2024 5:11:00 PM

Of course. I really don't know how you do all the writing you do. Plus, I really love what you write, your sense of humor, and your dedication to this site. If I didn't know better, I would think you were the owner because you are so diligent about responding to everyone. I am impressed!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 12/19/2022 5:38:00 AM

I get what you are saying here! Cool to see you’ve still been setting aside some time for your awesome commentary/limericking! Always, Laura Ps: your comments on my poetry are heartwarming. I appreciate your thoughtful words!

Duke Beaufort
Date: 1/22/2023 4:22:00 PM

Thanks Laura. You are very kind indeed. I will check out some of yours right now!!