I Need More Than An Suv

Though few drive off-road in their truck
Pick-up owners have run amok
Having a tail gate
Their mood will elate 
While the cabin carries a schmuck


Author's note: A pass to those folks who use their truck for business on a regular basis. However, a status truck reveals a weak mind and hurts the environment more than a "normal" car. Those are already bad enough.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Dietrich Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 5:03 PM
thanks for the sweet comments you left me
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January 24, 2024 at 5:11 PM
Of course. I really don't know how you do all the writing you do. Plus, I really love what you write, your sense of humor, and your dedication to this site. If I didn't know better, I would think you were the owner because you are so diligent about responding to everyone. I am impressed!
Dietrich Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 5:03 PM
funny. I love that word schmuck.
Beaufort Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 5:12 PM
Well, it rhymes with truck....as do some other words, but this worked out just right. I am always looking for a way to bring some laughs.
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December 19, 2022 at 5:38 AM
I get what you are saying here! Cool to see you’ve still been setting aside some time for your awesome commentary/limericking! Always, Laura Ps: your comments on my poetry are heartwarming. I appreciate your thoughtful words!
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January 22, 2023 at 4:22 PM
Thanks Laura. You are very kind indeed. I will check out some of yours right now!!
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