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I Miss You

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Oh, and people, before your imagination goes haywire: the tags on this poem are:

#metaphor, #poetry and #words

So this is not about a specific person or persons.

Now go figure me out ;)

I am stuck here find myself in vortices that tear in two ways left right torn asunder Flooded feelings but I miss you I miss you does that mean I am back? Let me be me don't pull on me or push Let me sit upright or squat or everything in between without questioning Don't make me spiral out of myself lose control be pushed under to never emerge Don't stick needles in me or pins or feed me vials of poison I didn't ask for If you can do that then consider me back *** August 3, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Shubham Pal Chowdhury

Date: 10/2/2017 5:36:00 AM

Dude this is amazing

Darren White
Date: 10/2/2017 10:28:00 AM

Thank you so very much :)

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 8/27/2017 4:59:00 PM

I love penguins they have so much oersonality and strength. They have too,``````````` look at where they live and, I might add, thrive. I think I know whom you are addressing. The only thing I can say is surround yourself with people who love and support you the rest don't matter one d!@#$% bit.

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/28/2017 1:05:00 AM

Oh dear my finger must have slipped. Yikes!!!!!!!

Darren White
Date: 8/28/2017 12:35:00 AM

I love the strong words there :) Thank you!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 8/3/2017 10:01:00 PM

Just be you, Darren. Don't let anybody do these things to you. I love your poem.

Darren White
Date: 8/4/2017 12:23:00 AM

I will try, Agnes, isn't always so easy. Thank you :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/3/2017 9:09:00 PM

Piroet write on!

Darren White
Date: 8/4/2017 12:22:00 AM

I will ma mo, merci :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/3/2017 8:11:00 AM

It sounds like someone hiding from a bad experience with doctors, mentally and wanting their self back . Which, I could see how that could happen, even if totally wrong !

Darren White
Date: 8/3/2017 1:51:00 PM

I always like it if someone finds meaning in what I write :) Thanks Heidi.

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/3/2017 8:04:00 AM

What!...Daren is back!...Oh ok...write on my friend...god bless...^WW^

Darren White
Date: 8/3/2017 1:50:00 PM

Yeah, but I was only taking a break :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/3/2017 7:41:00 AM

An emotional write, dear Darren

Darren White
Date: 8/3/2017 1:50:00 PM

It is, Kim. Thank you

Tim Smith

Date: 8/3/2017 5:21:00 AM

You can carry us, can turn on us, but as Arnold says "I'll be back" . I love your personification...my favorite type of poem

Darren White
Date: 8/3/2017 6:10:00 AM

Thanks so much my friend <3

Maria Williams

Date: 8/3/2017 5:09:00 AM

Do not give up your pen Darren, you were born to write....Maria

Darren White
Date: 8/3/2017 5:13:00 AM

Thanks Maria, I promise I won't stop writing.

Lin Lane

Date: 8/3/2017 3:55:00 AM

I love your sassy poet's notes, Darren. lol I hope those timbers Budgie mentioned are strong enough because your pen certainly is. You're one of a kind.

Darren White
Date: 8/3/2017 5:13:00 AM

;) Budgie named me Duir, I'm a strong oak, I can build bridges. Thanks Lin.

White Wolf

Date: 8/3/2017 12:57:00 AM

Clear as a bell to me! Pontiff Duir! The bridge builder! Made of Royal Oak! I know this timber is not generally used for bridges, but this is a special imaginative bridge!

Darren White
Date: 8/3/2017 1:17:00 AM

And thanks for 'asunder' Budge :)

Darren White
Date: 8/3/2017 1:12:00 AM

And a sturdy one too for that matter LOL Thanks Budgie :)