I Miss You

I heard your voice in my loneliness
As lovely as a song I wanted to hear,
I saw your face in the crowd 
Smiling at me, the sweetest smile of yours.

The heaven’s mourning
Crying with me
As I felt the sadness
Of missing you.

I want to hear your voice 
I’m longing for your touch 
Or even the sight of you 
is enough…

I am missing you
I am missing you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Breidenthal Avatar
November 4, 2011 at 11:06 PM
You should write this as a song!
Breidenthal Avatar
November 4, 2011 at 11:05 PM
Aw, what a magnificent poem! I felt the sadness...of this poem! Great one! -D. W. Breidenthal
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October 29, 2011 at 7:40 PM
Charmane, congratulations on your featured poem of the week. Have yourself a wonderful night ;-) God bless,..p.d.
Nolido Avatar
October 25, 2011 at 11:47 PM
your poem is amazing. :") this poem reminds me of my dad who just passed away. Keep it up!
Johnson Avatar
October 22, 2011 at 9:16 AM
This is a well expressed tribute to someone who is missed!!! It is deeply heartfelt!!! Congrats. on your poem being featured!!!
Mehta Avatar
October 21, 2011 at 6:33 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Charmane
Brown Avatar
October 13, 2011 at 12:16 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Charmane. Love, Carol
Keys Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 7:04 AM
intense feelings stated nicely. thank you, chuck
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