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I Miss You

I heard your voice in my loneliness As lovely as a song I wanted to hear, I saw your face in the crowd Smiling at me, the sweetest smile of yours. The heaven’s mourning Crying with me As I felt the sadness Of missing you. I want to hear your voice I’m longing for your touch Or even the sight of you is enough… I am missing you I am missing you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/4/2011 11:06:00 PM
You should write this as a song!
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Date: 11/4/2011 11:05:00 PM
Aw, what a magnificent poem! I felt the sadness...of this poem! Great one! -D. W. Breidenthal
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Date: 10/29/2011 7:40:00 PM
Charmane, congratulations on your featured poem of the week. Have yourself a wonderful night ;-) God bless,..p.d.
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Date: 10/25/2011 11:47:00 PM
your poem is amazing. :") this poem reminds me of my dad who just passed away. Keep it up!
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Date: 10/22/2011 9:16:00 AM
This is a well expressed tribute to someone who is missed!!! It is deeply heartfelt!!! Congrats. on your poem being featured!!!
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Date: 10/21/2011 6:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Charmane
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Date: 10/13/2011 12:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Charmane. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/25/2010 7:04:00 AM
intense feelings stated nicely. thank you, chuck
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