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I Miss My Girlfriend

“Today, I Miss My Girlfriend…!” In 1999, when my girlfriend talked. It took a while……………………………………………………………………….. ………………………………………………………………………………….………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………...! Today, when my wife talks. It takes a while………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………..………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………..………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………..………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………...….…!! “Today, I Miss My Girlfriend…!” NoelsArt Comments: Yes, I know guys can talk too much too. We all do sometimes. If you like, you could substitute the word “girlfriend” with “boyfriend” and “wife” with “husband”. :) What I like best about this poem is, I replaced “In 2019” with the word “Today”. So with each new year, “Today” changes, keeping the poem "up to date". FEEDBACK WELCOME

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Date: 10/29/2019 3:09:00 PM
Hello Noel Flater, sometimes women have a lot to speak about. Then sometimes the men have alot to speak about. Depends on the woman and same for the man. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 3/15/2019 6:04:00 AM
The perfect "man" poem which makes so much sense, as I too have taken on this persona, it makes life easier, and worrying is a thing of the past. NICE!
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Noel Flater
Date: 3/15/2019 3:42:00 PM
Caren, thanks for your feedback. You have great humor and wisdom. Noel from NoelsArt

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