Noel Flater Poet Free verse

I Miss My Girlfriend

“Today, I Miss My Girlfriend…!”

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“Today, I Miss My Girlfriend…!”

NoelsArt
Comments: Yes, I know guys can talk too much too.  We all do sometimes.  If you like, you could substitute the word “girlfriend” with “boyfriend” and “wife” with “husband”.  :)

What I like best about this poem is, I replaced “In 2019” with the word “Today”.  So with each new year, “Today” changes, keeping the poem "up to date".  FEEDBACK WELCOME

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Darlene De Beaulieu October 29, 2019 at 3:09 PM Hello Noel Flater, sometimes women have a lot to speak about. Then sometimes the men have alot to speak about. Depends on the woman and same for the man. have a nice day my friend.

Caren Krutsinger March 15, 2019 at 6:04 AM The perfect "man" poem which makes so much sense, as I too have taken on this persona, it makes life easier, and worrying is a thing of the past. NICE! Noel Flater March 15, 2019 at 3:42 PM Caren, thanks for your feedback. You have great humor and wisdom. Noel from NoelsArt