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For Ink Empress' I Miss Contest 27 Jul 24 ' The books I loved in childhood-- the first loves-- I've read so often that I've internalized them in some really essential way: they are more inside me now than out ' -- Donna Tartt
Parchment lays open by the fire as evenings stretch and yawn again, below my shoulders whispers flow through white lace curtains and then rain-- To somewhere near yet far away while unsung heroes clutch the day and eyes hold lines to understand, a plot, a move which rolls away. That sometimes fables write themselves before an ending needs to live, and phrases awed are realized so.much to slay, so much to give-- Before the pages turn once more through white lace curtains, through the hall how mystery bleeds in my eyes action throws villains on the wall: I miss my childhood books. Serpents reel about this dreamy-dressed face; and verses paint beautifully the old sheets igniting a place , while nights transform into old age and wooden dragons droop to creep between the edges of a page!

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Date: 9/4/2024 5:57:00 PM
Just amazing. Love this one. I, too, was a avid reader during childhood and still today, I love to read. Wonderful poem. God bless you with love, Gina
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Date: 8/9/2024 5:12:00 AM
Dear Nette, Congratulations on your contest win. The word choices and flow are so beautiful with this penning. I don't know what caused your long absence but welcome back. Your talents are a gift and much appreciated. Blessings
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Date: 8/8/2024 11:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative write. I am with you. I also miss my childhood books. Have a fun day............
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Date: 8/8/2024 6:13:00 AM
Dear nette this is so beautiful and so well written, i really loved it and i can resonate also with what youv expressed. Books were my way to getaway , and what kept me going in my childhood too. I loves it …i wasnt sure if you wanted to write “ while or white lace” you are a gifted poet! Keep sharing poems that touch your readers heart! Congratulations on your win
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 8/9/2024 2:40:00 PM
right you are, ink..I meant ' white' which i already corrected, a typo error from this cellphone I'm using as my wifi has been down for months...thankyou for considering my entry as part of your winners' list!
Date: 7/29/2024 7:34:00 PM
Beautiful reprise of the drama of imaginative 'childhood' stories, Nette. Bravo! :) Gershon
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Date: 7/28/2024 10:23:00 PM
You chose such an interesting and precious memory. I too was enamored of books. I would get them from the library or order them from magazines they gave us at school. Spent so many hours reading on my bed. We didn't have lots of TV in those days, so books were very special. Well done, Nette.
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Date: 7/28/2024 2:17:00 PM
Lovely take on the contest Nette... i think many miss such things..
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Date: 7/28/2024 5:08:00 AM
Nette, I love the thoughts and memories conjured by your lovely lines here! I really like your phrasing and word choice as they made for such a beautiful read! Good Luck for the contest!! Happy Sunday!!
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Date: 7/28/2024 2:00:00 AM
Like you I miss the books which I "devoured" in my childhood days, Nette. (Luckily there was no radio or telly in our house!) I love this technically rich poem, and the ending is one to be proud of! ~ Warm regards, my friend // paul
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Date: 7/27/2024 11:37:00 PM
As Ruben useta say "to mine faves" Nette, such excellence makes me feel like when I stand on the rocks of our Lake Superior shoreline in Minnesota, symmetrical dignity of crunching waves descending then ascending, dreams-in, glisten, dreams-out, reflect...
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Date: 7/27/2024 5:32:00 PM
Gosh, you're so good. I can't say I miss childhood books, wasn't much of a reader back then. What I miss is too painful to write about for a contest, for sure. Have a great weekend Nette
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