I miss

Forcing myself 
to live in green-
belt of forest with
no civil comforts or concerns
I don’t flinch. I won’t.

Living in
extremes of 
two seasons
cinder-hot Sun
drowning rain
I don’t complain, I can’t

one summer was different

A passionate couple
Fire-Air, waltzed through
acres of my nearby forest,
grey-burning lives small & big –
I didn’t cry. 

After HER party, I
went to see the charred
landscape, my heart thumped
wild, I could feel my soul in throat –
I didn’t cry

I stilled my thoughts - I
knelt  to feel, I knelt
to beat coal-black ground, I
thumped chest, I flayed my 
hands to sky, I howled,	

Roared, wailed, cried
I clenched my fist,
boxed at guiltless air, I
called his partner names –
I sobbed back to silence

With impotent-raging silence
my hands cradled a tiny
dying burnt bird gasp for last
gulp of air, I knelt
in silence. That day
I cried, I missed God that day

I sobbed back to silence

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Date: 8/22/2024 6:55:00 AM
Wow! Congratulations! Thanks for sharing this, making me virtually miss yesterday's green environment... Thanks so much for your constant uplifting comments. God bless you.
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Date: 8/11/2024 3:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. I can imagine how sad that must be to see those areas where so much forest has burned, but it will come back after a long time. Sara K
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Date: 8/11/2024 4:37:00 AM
thank you for this kind visit dear poet. I agree, it will be back after long time. I appreciate your words. thank you.
Date: 8/8/2024 12:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your powerful/wonderful write. Great Ending... Have a fun day............
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thriveni c mysore
Date: 8/8/2024 7:41:00 PM
Thank you dear poet for your sweet message. I am grateful for your time. Cheers.
Date: 8/8/2024 6:55:00 AM
Dear talented soul; i love the opening in this very creatively written poem: pleasure reading this, congratulations on your win
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thriveni c mysore
Date: 8/8/2024 7:00:00 AM
It is a joy to be read by you dear poet Empress. I am grateful for the placement. I am so glad. Thank you for the contest.Thank you for this happiness. Blessings & cheers.
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