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I Met This Charming Moonbeam Last Night

The arms of the willow started to sway and this curious glow rippled my way. While flirting with my feet, nature played a song so sweet. The lake our dance floor 'til the sun's first ray.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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Date: 12/18/2008 10:00:00 PM
Wow Kristen, what an amazing imagination you have and I am so glad you have combined your imagination and your writing talent to present us with such a beautiful poem. Congratulations for being featured... MPK
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Date: 12/16/2008 8:25:00 PM
WOW!!!! I LOVE THIS, kristin. Lainie
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Date: 12/16/2008 6:05:00 AM
Good write, Kristin. I like the image, the dance floor idea. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
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Date: 12/15/2008 5:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Warmest wishes for a beautiful holiday season. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/15/2008 6:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Kristin. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/14/2008 5:17:00 PM
I really like this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Nice use of rhyme and personification. Keep on writing! Wishing you ongoing success. Karen
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