I Met This Charming Moonbeam Last Night

The arms of the willow started to sway
and this curious glow rippled my way.
While flirting with my feet,
nature played a song so sweet.
The lake our dance floor 'til the sun's first ray.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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Pig Knuckles Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 10:00 PM
Wow Kristen, what an amazing imagination you have and I am so glad you have combined your imagination and your writing talent to present us with such a beautiful poem. Congratulations for being featured... MPK
George   Avatar
December 16, 2008 at 8:25 PM
WOW!!!! I LOVE THIS, kristin. Lainie
Austin Avatar
December 16, 2008 at 6:05 AM
Good write, Kristin. I like the image, the dance floor idea. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
Winter Avatar
December 15, 2008 at 5:24 PM
Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Warmest wishes for a beautiful holiday season. Love, Shar
Brown Avatar
December 15, 2008 at 6:22 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Kristin. Love, Carol
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December 14, 2008 at 5:17 PM
I really like this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Nice use of rhyme and personification. Keep on writing! Wishing you ongoing success. Karen
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