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I Met Her On a Tuesday

Hints of lilac filtered through the garden a pretty butterfly just sat at rest me lost in amazement soft rays of sunshine clinging to my chest The stone bench held my attention as love notes floated through the air my heart was in a flutter sensing she was near Her eyes were sweet as honey her skin had that special glow her lips so moist they begged for me to memorize the passion that they showed I met her on a Tuesday that's when the world for me would shift the stars shot past the heavens as our souls would forever drift

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/10/2016 8:01:00 PM
Ah an encounter with a marvelous vision that strikes one with the immediacy of love at first sight! It happens quite often I suspect and sometimes rather disappointing. A Very lovely poem.
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Date: 12/10/2016 5:13:00 PM
Romantically gorgeous Tim, a swoon and a sigh. :)
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Date: 12/7/2016 9:31:00 AM
So beautiful Tim, so romantic, surely one of your best, hard to tell there are so manyA7 for sure
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Date: 12/7/2016 9:31:00 AM
Forgot the seven
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Date: 11/24/2016 9:14:00 AM
best to you & yours on this day of giving thanks!
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Date: 11/23/2016 5:45:00 AM
Such a beautiful, romantic love poem :)
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Date: 11/22/2016 11:05:00 PM
What a true romantic write brother, i very much enjoyed this. I too meet that special someone on a tuesday!
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Date: 11/21/2016 8:40:00 PM
Soooooo romantic, I am in La la land, swooning over this beauty ^_^
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Date: 11/20/2016 5:09:00 PM
Very lovely poem, Mr. Smith. Thank you for sharing. --Wesley C.
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Date: 11/20/2016 5:00:00 PM
"her lips so moist they begged for me to memorize the passion that they showed" love these two lines - what a great poem. A Fav!
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Date: 11/18/2016 6:06:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful Tim. I am sure this one will have ladies swooning.
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Date: 11/18/2016 2:00:00 PM
- Beautiful from the first to the last line, Tim :) - Best wishes for a peaceful and lovely weekend:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/18/2016 1:09:00 PM
Romance oozes from every line, Tim. A beautiful write full of longing and love.
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Date: 11/18/2016 12:54:00 PM
One of your best...so beautiful Tim....So many wonderful lines...Love those hints of lilacs...A fave.
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Date: 11/18/2016 12:33:00 PM
Beautiful and romantic dear friend, Tim. May you be forever happy! Your poem reminded me of a friend of mine who met her on Tuesday, got married on Saturday and are still together after 32 years with two children. True story!
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Date: 11/18/2016 10:07:00 AM
whew..."her lips so moist they begged for me..." your passion shows so profusely in your writes, Tim.
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