Tim Smith Poet Rhyme

I Met Her On a Tuesday

Hints of lilac filtered through the garden
a pretty butterfly just sat at rest
me  lost in amazement
soft rays of sunshine clinging to my chest

The stone bench held my attention
as love notes floated through the air
my heart was in a flutter
sensing she was near

Her eyes were sweet as honey
her skin had that special glow
her lips so moist they begged for me
to memorize the passion that they showed

I met her on a Tuesday
that's when the world for me would shift
the stars shot past the heavens
as our souls would forever drift

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Roy Merritt December 10, 2016 at 8:01 PM Ah an encounter with a marvelous vision that strikes one with the immediacy of love at first sight! It happens quite often I suspect and sometimes rather disappointing. A Very lovely poem.

Paloma P December 10, 2016 at 5:13 PM Romantically gorgeous Tim, a swoon and a sigh. :)

John Hamilton December 7, 2016 at 9:31 AM So beautiful Tim, so romantic, surely one of your best, hard to tell there are so manyA7 for sure

John Hamilton December 7, 2016 at 9:31 AM Forgot the seven

Lim'Rik Flats November 24, 2016 at 9:14 AM best to you & yours on this day of giving thanks!

Darren White November 23, 2016 at 5:45 AM Such a beautiful, romantic love poem :)

Chris Boskovski November 22, 2016 at 11:05 PM What a true romantic write brother, i very much enjoyed this. I too meet that special someone on a tuesday!

Akkina Downing November 21, 2016 at 8:40 PM Soooooo romantic, I am in La la land, swooning over this beauty ^_^

Space Cadet November 20, 2016 at 5:09 PM Very lovely poem, Mr. Smith. Thank you for sharing. --Wesley C.

Maurice Yvonne November 20, 2016 at 5:00 PM "her lips so moist they begged for me to memorize the passion that they showed" love these two lines - what a great poem. A Fav!

Chris Green November 18, 2016 at 6:06 PM Absolutely beautiful Tim. I am sure this one will have ladies swooning.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 18, 2016 at 2:00 PM - Beautiful from the first to the last line, Tim :) - Best wishes for a peaceful and lovely weekend:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian November 18, 2016 at 1:09 PM Romance oozes from every line, Tim. A beautiful write full of longing and love.

Charmaine Chircop November 18, 2016 at 12:54 PM One of your best...so beautiful Tim....So many wonderful lines...Love those hints of lilacs...A fave.

Demetrios Trifiatis November 18, 2016 at 12:33 PM Beautiful and romantic dear friend, Tim. May you be forever happy! Your poem reminded me of a friend of mine who met her on Tuesday, got married on Saturday and are still together after 32 years with two children. True story!

Lin Lane November 18, 2016 at 10:07 AM whew..."her lips so moist they begged for me..." your passion shows so profusely in your writes, Tim.