I Love You Forever and Ever -Tritina

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(Tritina) You know by now just how much I do love You because you mean more than you will know and I'll always love you forever Looking in your eyes I see love forever And the stars in the sky sparkle with your love ‘Cause sometimes there's only me and you You're the one that makes me strong and in you I trust with all my heart and soul forever There's nobody in the world like you my love I know that I'll love you now and forever. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 November,20,2014 (written alternating pentameters and tetrameters)

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Paul Callus

Date: 11/22/2014 4:27:00 AM

Honest declaration of love, full of faith and trust. That's how true love should be. Well done, Dorian. // paul

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/21/2014 12:51:00 PM

A great confidence in love for loved one. A sweetest poem of 7. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/21/2014 1:17:00 PM

One can only dream pray hope and trust, everyday in these matters.Thank you so much my dear friend BL! You're so sweet as always. God bless you. :) xxx D.

Ankit Sampat

Date: 11/21/2014 8:16:00 AM

Hi Dorian, Beautiful Poem. Leaves me touched, moved and inspired. Makes me realize how much my girlfriend loves me. Keep up the good work. Thumbs up!!!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/21/2014 8:46:00 AM

Thank you so much Ankit, am so glad to know that my love poem has touched and inspired you in some way. Great! Thats the main reason behind my poetry, is to inspire many who chance to read it. :) xxxx D.

Tim Smith

Date: 11/20/2014 11:48:00 PM

Wow Dorian..a true declaration of your love...hugs Tim

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/21/2014 8:40:00 AM

Thank you Tim! And Hugs to you too! :) xxxx D.