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So many things I want to tell you my Dad But I choke up in tears feeling awfully sad, I grew-up so fast since the day you died Pledging urgently to do well as tears dried. Don't recall listening to anything you said Never took trash out, never made my bed, You asked me to study, keep up my grades Instead I focused on video games I played. To earn my badges, we went on scouting trips Soon after, I stopped going to their meetings. You will be proud Dad, now I have some clout I honored your will becoming an Eagle Scout. Remember the day when we played baseball You stole second base ahead of my fast ball. Recalling happy times with love and might We miss you so much at dinner every night. I have aced my grades in science and math Well on my way to choosing a career path, I'm proud to tell you Stanford accepted me On a full scholarship I'll complete my degree. I was so self absorbed, always feeling mad I never told you how much I love you Dad. I wish to be just like you, but can never be Standards you set are so high to achieve. I have taken a job to help Mom pay the bills We watch every penny avoiding the thrills. Mom will visit you soon, she's well as can be Please let her know you're so proud of me! Placed 2nd September 16, 2017 Poems that paint a picture 2 Rhyme:aabb Painting by: Mike Theuer Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 3/31/2023 9:37:00 AM
This is so touching. Unfortunately children know the depth of love of their parents only after they have left this world. So very emotive tugging at my heartstrings! Deeply moving !
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Date: 2/28/2023 8:45:00 PM
Ahhh, this one is very very touching. So much unspoken love yet deeply known. Heartfelt, my fiend.
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Date: 5/26/2019 4:05:00 PM
Finally seeing this one from a while back! So here is a very belated congrats on your win with this heartfelt poem, Vijay.
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Date: 9/20/2017 8:03:00 PM
Congratulations Vijay with your fine win with this wonderfully touching poem.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/20/2017 8:50:00 PM
Thank you Susan... congrats on your #1 placement..well deserved!
Date: 9/20/2017 2:59:00 PM
congratulations Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/20/2017 3:25:00 PM
Thank you Jack!
Date: 9/20/2017 1:04:00 PM
Vijay, so sad yet beautiful with emotion...CONGRATULATIONS!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/20/2017 1:21:00 PM
Thank you BW!
Date: 9/20/2017 11:19:00 AM
Wonderful poem, Vijay! Congrats on your win. Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/20/2017 1:21:00 PM
Thank you Janice!
Date: 9/20/2017 8:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Vijay, your poem is beautifully written very emotional. :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/20/2017 9:24:00 AM
Thanks Roy for your lovely feedback!
Date: 9/20/2017 7:51:00 AM
Back for congrats my friend!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/20/2017 9:23:00 AM
Thank you Kim!
Date: 9/20/2017 7:41:00 AM
Congratulations for your win! I believed this was going to do well! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/20/2017 7:44:00 AM
Thanks Heidi--you did well also, and much deserved congratulations to you!!
Date: 9/20/2017 7:04:00 AM
Sad and deep poem, great take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/20/2017 9:22:00 AM
Thank you Silent One!
Date: 9/20/2017 7:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement, Vijay. Very touching poetic narrative.4xs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/20/2017 9:22:00 AM
Thank you Subimal!
Date: 9/17/2017 1:50:00 PM
A very emotive and evocative write Vijay. Very sincere and heartfelt emotion. Well done my friend. Good luck in the contest!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/17/2017 2:53:00 PM
Thank you Susan.. appreciate your heartfelt comments!
Date: 9/17/2017 12:24:00 PM
Very touching write, Vijay, this one was very close to home. Good luck in the contest a winner already. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/17/2017 12:52:00 PM
Thank you Eve for your support.. love your feedback!
Date: 9/17/2017 12:07:00 PM
- A touching conversation between son and father - He is certainly proud of you, Vijay - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/17/2017 12:21:00 PM
Lovely to hear from you, as always Anne-Lise! Your caring comments are so delightful to read--many thanks!!
Date: 9/17/2017 11:50:00 AM
Very touching and very well written, Vijay ... Nicely expressed emotions ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/17/2017 12:19:00 PM
Thank you Probir for your thoughtful comments!
Date: 9/17/2017 10:49:00 AM
that was very emotional, i felt sad and sorry at the same time; it's hard to move on and i hope all is well with thee and thy mom; a well written piece, tugged at my heartstrings too. cheers!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/17/2017 11:38:00 AM
Thank you John for your thoughtful and helpful comments--always delighted by visit!
Date: 9/17/2017 6:06:00 AM
This is wonderful, a grand tribute to your father! You have written a significantly remarkable poem, dedicating your life to pleasing your father, even though he is no longer with you, and wanting to make him proud! I really enjoyed reading your illustrious piece this morning! What a fantastic poem, Great Work!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/17/2017 7:41:00 AM
Thank you Russell for your thoughtful comments--your words are always comforting and helpful!
Date: 9/16/2017 6:26:00 PM
Beautiful tribute of son to father. I enjoyed very much!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/16/2017 6:50:00 PM
Thank you Kim!
Date: 9/16/2017 5:40:00 PM
Sad and lovely and full of emotions. You put all of it into this And it turned out perfect. You are vey talented Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/16/2017 5:59:00 PM
Such lovely comments from a an imaginative creative poet--love your feedback James!
Date: 9/16/2017 4:45:00 PM
Vijay, I think that this one is a good contender in the contest..I don't know if it is based or your life or the life of another or on how you would think someone would feel in that situation but the emotion in it is very expressive of that situation..Thanks for dropping by my pages..Sara
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/16/2017 5:32:00 PM
Thank you Sara for reading through this rather long poem.. appreciate your detailed feedback and helpful comments!
Date: 9/16/2017 4:06:00 PM
A very touching poem Vijay. Well done and full of authentic expression ! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/16/2017 5:30:00 PM
Thank you Heidi for such wonderful feedback!

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