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I Love You Dad

So many things I want to tell you my Dad
But I choke up in tears feeling awfully sad,
I grew-up so fast since the day you died
Pledging urgently to do well as tears dried.

Don't recall listening to anything you said
Never took trash out, never made my bed, 
You asked me to study, keep up my grades
Instead I focused on video games I played. 

To earn my badges, we went on scouting trips 
Soon after, I stopped going to their meetings.
You will be proud Dad, now I have some clout
I honored your will becoming an Eagle Scout.

Remember the day when we played baseball 
You stole second base ahead of my fast ball.
Recalling happy times with love and might
We miss you so much at dinner every night. 

I have aced my grades in science and  math
Well on my way to choosing a career path,
I'm proud to tell you Stanford accepted me
On a full scholarship I'll complete my degree.

I was so self absorbed, always feeling mad
I never told you how much I love you Dad.
I wish to be just like you, but can never be
Standards you set are so high to achieve. 

I have taken a job to help Mom pay the bills
We watch every penny avoiding the thrills.
Mom will visit you soon, she's well as can be
Please let her know you're so proud of me!

Placed 2nd
September 16, 2017
Poems that paint a picture 2
Rhyme:aabb
Painting by: Mike Theuer
Sponsor: Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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George Avatar
March 31, 2023 at 9:37 AM
This is so touching. Unfortunately children know the depth of love of their parents only after they have left this world. So very emotive tugging at my heartstrings! Deeply moving !
Chuuk Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 8:45 PM
Ahhh, this one is very very touching. So much unspoken love yet deeply known. Heartfelt, my fiend.
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 4:05 PM
Finally seeing this one from a while back! So here is a very belated congrats on your win with this heartfelt poem, Vijay.
Ashley Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 8:03 PM
Congratulations Vijay with your fine win with this wonderfully touching poem.
Pandit Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 8:50 PM
Thank you Susan... congrats on your #1 placement..well deserved!
Webster Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 2:59 PM
congratulations Vijay!
Pandit Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 3:25 PM
Thank you Jack!
La France Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 1:04 PM
Vijay, so sad yet beautiful with emotion...CONGRATULATIONS!
Pandit Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 1:21 PM
Thank you BW!
Canerdy Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 11:19 AM
Wonderful poem, Vijay! Congrats on your win. Janice
Pandit Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 1:21 PM
Thank you Janice!
Pett Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 8:48 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Vijay, your poem is beautifully written very emotional. :)
Pandit Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 9:24 AM
Thanks Roy for your lovely feedback!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:51 AM
Back for congrats my friend!
Pandit Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 9:23 AM
Thank you Kim!
Sands Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:41 AM
Congratulations for your win! I believed this was going to do well! :)
Pandit Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:44 AM
Thanks Heidi--you did well also, and much deserved congratulations to you!!
One Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:04 AM
Sad and deep poem, great take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest
Pandit Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 9:22 AM
Thank you Silent One!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:01 AM
Congratulations on your placement, Vijay. Very touching poetic narrative.4xs
Pandit Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 9:22 AM
Thank you Subimal!
Ashley Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 1:50 PM
A very emotive and evocative write Vijay. Very sincere and heartfelt emotion. Well done my friend. Good luck in the contest!
Pandit Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 2:53 PM
Thank you Susan.. appreciate your heartfelt comments!
Roper Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 12:24 PM
Very touching write, Vijay, this one was very close to home. Good luck in the contest a winner already. Hugs Eve ~`*
Pandit Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 12:52 PM
Thank you Eve for your support.. love your feedback!
Andresen Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 12:07 PM
- A touching conversation between son and father - He is certainly proud of you, Vijay - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 12:21 PM
Lovely to hear from you, as always Anne-Lise! Your caring comments are so delightful to read--many thanks!!
Gupta Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 11:50 AM
Very touching and very well written, Vijay ... Nicely expressed emotions ...
Pandit Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 12:19 PM
Thank you Probir for your thoughtful comments!
Leong Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 10:49 AM
that was very emotional, i felt sad and sorry at the same time; it's hard to move on and i hope all is well with thee and thy mom; a well written piece, tugged at my heartstrings too. cheers!
Pandit Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 11:38 AM
Thank you John for your thoughtful and helpful comments--always delighted by visit!
Sivey Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 6:06 AM
This is wonderful, a grand tribute to your father! You have written a significantly remarkable poem, dedicating your life to pleasing your father, even though he is no longer with you, and wanting to make him proud! I really enjoyed reading your illustrious piece this morning! What a fantastic poem, Great Work!!
Pandit Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 7:41 AM
Thank you Russell for your thoughtful comments--your words are always comforting and helpful!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 6:26 PM
Beautiful tribute of son to father. I enjoyed very much!
Pandit Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 6:50 PM
Thank you Kim!
Swartz Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 5:40 PM
Sad and lovely and full of emotions. You put all of it into this And it turned out perfect. You are vey talented Vijay.
Pandit Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 5:59 PM
Such lovely comments from a an imaginative creative poet--love your feedback James!
Kendrick Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 4:45 PM
Vijay, I think that this one is a good contender in the contest..I don't know if it is based or your life or the life of another or on how you would think someone would feel in that situation but the emotion in it is very expressive of that situation..Thanks for dropping by my pages..Sara
Pandit Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 5:32 PM
Thank you Sara for reading through this rather long poem.. appreciate your detailed feedback and helpful comments!
Sands Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 4:06 PM
A very touching poem Vijay. Well done and full of authentic expression ! :)
Pandit Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 5:30 PM
Thank you Heidi for such wonderful feedback!
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