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I Love You Because For Mat Caliri's Competition

You are an avenue Of peeping daffodils Dancing in the evening wind You are fresh blackberries The first flush of autumn The pickings of my jam jar You are a floating cloud Reflecting depths of blue On the wintry bay You are the light On a December evening Curled beside my glowing log You are a droplet of snow Falling from the eaves Kissing my face You are the silks of the orient Orange, violet and scarlet Draped on an Indian princess You are my caring girl Boisterous, teasing, funky Simply, You are You

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/22/2010 12:07:00 AM
A vivid imagery, congratulations on your win, Deirdre. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 2/21/2010 9:41:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Deirdre!! Love the imagery.
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Date: 2/21/2010 7:45:00 PM
Love the 3rd last stanza!
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Date: 2/21/2010 8:44:00 AM
A beauty, and well deserving such a win in Matt's contest! Congratulations to you Deirdre! Love, Carrie
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Date: 2/17/2010 9:35:00 AM
Sounds so beautiful and colorful
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Date: 2/15/2010 11:32:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Deirdre. I enjoyed reading it. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/14/2010 6:07:00 PM
Beautiful, Truly beautiful, Deirrdre! I wish you good luck in the contest! Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 2/14/2010 12:52:00 PM
Sounds like a winner to me . Jim Reeves , sing your heart out !!! ..
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