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I will never forget the first time I saw you, you looked right at me with those eyes of blue; and I knew at that moment you were the one, when you said hello I knew- no other would do. We like to drink coffee in cafes head to head, you whisper- you are sexy with those lips of red; later, we snuggle so nice and close on the sofa, on days like this our love is so deep- but unsaid. We love to stroll hand in hand around the park, and on a bench you open your book to a bookmark; and read to me with your deep, beautiful voice, oh lovely- then I am distracted by a sweet skylark. At night, in our bed you stroke my hair so gently, your ear to my tummy you say- love you baby; this journey of love has been a delight darling, with all your sweet nothings and words of beauty. ___________________________ November 14, 2017 Poetry/Rubaiyat/I Love You Baby Copyright Protected, ID 17-9612-42-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Whisper Sweet Nothings sponsor, Julie Leigh Rodeheaver Fourth Place

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Date: 11/25/2017 5:25:00 PM
So romantic :) Very beautiful
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Date: 11/23/2017 2:35:00 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your wonderful win, Constance - keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
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Date: 11/19/2017 10:29:00 PM
Congrats on your win, lovely write.
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Date: 11/17/2017 5:20:00 PM
Officially you are a Persian... Because only Persian can do Rubai that well.....
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Date: 11/14/2017 10:27:00 PM
A warm and loving piece, Constance, good luck in the contest. Viv x
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Date: 11/14/2017 6:00:00 PM
A romantic and lovely write Broken Wings. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 11/14/2017 2:46:00 PM
Very rhythmic, lovely poem--best for a win, BW!
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