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I Love You Baby

I will never forget the first time I saw you, you looked right at me with those eyes of blue; and I knew at that moment you were the one, when you said hello I knew- no other would do. We like to drink coffee in cafes head to head, you whisper- you are sexy with those lips of red; later, we snuggle so nice and close on the sofa, on days like this our love is so deep- but unsaid. We love to stroll hand in hand around the park, and on a bench you open your book to a bookmark; and read to me with your deep, beautiful voice, oh lovely- then I am distracted by a sweet skylark. At night, in our bed you stroke my hair so gently, your ear to my tummy you say- love you baby; this journey of love has been a delight darling, with all your sweet nothings and words of beauty. ___________________________ November 14, 2017 Poetry/Rubaiyat/I Love You Baby Copyright Protected, ID 17-9612-42-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Whisper Sweet Nothings sponsor, Julie Leigh Rodeheaver Fourth Place
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Leachet Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 5:25 PM
So romantic :) Very beautiful
Barden Avatar
November 23, 2017 at 2:35 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your wonderful win, Constance - keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
Gauthier Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 10:29 PM
Congrats on your win, lovely write.
Salehi Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 5:20 PM
Officially you are a Persian... Because only Persian can do Rubai that well.....
Wigley Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 10:27 PM
A warm and loving piece, Constance, good luck in the contest. Viv x
Ashley Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 6:00 PM
A romantic and lovely write Broken Wings. Good luck in the contest!
Pandit Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 2:46 PM
Very rhythmic, lovely poem--best for a win, BW!
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