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I Love You ;

my destiny and your destiny arent the same. right now we live in two different states and i hate that you're so far away. Someday though I know that you'll come back because i have hope. Distnace shouldn't keep us apart nothing can stand between love from the heart. Hearing your voice makes me smile for miles and knowing your coming to see me makes me smile for days knowing youll finally be here. come home soon and while youre on your way I hope you know, I love you .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/25/2010 3:42:00 PM
please try to check the forms of poetry on Poetry Soup but I suggest this is a free verse.
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Date: 8/25/2010 3:36:00 PM
wonderful words to your love!this is on a lovely note...I would like to say welcome to the Soup, keep your poetry pen dancing to the drumbeat of your passion and pride... you will find a lot of encouragements here... keep up the great work. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 8/13/2010 10:22:00 AM
Another day of reading the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I enjoyed reading yours today Ashley. Have a wonderful weekend. I need to see if I can find some inspiration this weekend. Love, Carol
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