I Love You

Why is it so hard for you to say?
I love you
would have made me try another day;
a world of hearts have broken,
if only these words were spoken,
I love you~ goes a long way

You're kind, and otherwise attentive;
in many ways charming, inventive;
but my heart needed more incentive

I love you goes a long way -- 
I love you would have made me
try another day;

I love you, a heart's longevity -- 
not fully satisfied with gifts nor
bright levity

our shared laughs and good times
will always be cherished, but without
three words, even a profound love with
time will perish

I love you you could not say

I love you goes a long way....
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Buhagiar Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 2:26 AM
I always believed that good and kind actions go a lot longer than words.
DiMino Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 7:22 AM
They can: depends on who, where, when and how. Certainly words without action are meaningless. The best is the two combined. Even our spontaneous actions have words behind them. We think and feel our words, that's how words came into being. We felt something, and made a word to express it. Consciously we may not say, and just do it -- that is why our loved ones give us grace...but the heart longs to hear it...needs to hear I love you, spoken clearly, truly from the awake heart. Just my opinion. And I am not a professional counselor my children will attest at times.
One Avatar
September 8, 2024 at 12:55 PM
Thanks Joe.. I love you too... see it is not hard lol... There are so many songs about this, the one that springs to mind is the one by extreme and more than words.. As i personally believe actions speak louder than words...
DiMino Avatar
September 8, 2024 at 1:23 PM
Absolutely, actions are powerful. But words can be just as powerful, even more so. More than a punch, many a man has felt his life entirely destroyed by, I do not love you anymore. Words are the action of speaking, can be quite devastating. Flowers and deep felt honest, loving words are the perfect combination. If words are sincerely spoken, then they have manifest power.
George Avatar
September 7, 2024 at 10:14 PM
Agree with you cent percent, Joe. Those words are so magical . More than expensive gifts, the words- 'I love you' are valued. But for some, it is so difficult to utter. I am not talking about empty words. If said with sincerity, these words can keep the relationship alive and marriage, a passionate union for ever.
DiMino Avatar
September 8, 2024 at 6:48 AM
I agree. Well said, Valsa -- wise life observation and advice. Blessings.
Wolf Avatar
September 7, 2024 at 9:26 PM
You have hit the nail on the head here. These three words ARE so hard for so many to say... Once said, however, people wonder why it was so difficult. ~ Gershon
DiMino Avatar
September 8, 2024 at 6:49 AM
Sort of like bicarbonate and heartburn. Thank you my friend. Blessings.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 7, 2024 at 11:27 AM
Hello Joe DiMkino, yes ILove you goes a long way. when one peerson does not say those words, it makes the other person wonder dose this person care? i think I love you should be said often to the other person. Enjoy your day my firend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 8, 2024 at 11:41 AM
Hello Joe Di Mino, yes to hear "I love you" does make a person feel good. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
DiMino Avatar
September 7, 2024 at 4:56 PM
For myself, I love to hear I love you...and say it. Just makes me feel good. Blessings my friend. Have a great writing day!
Dietrich Avatar
September 7, 2024 at 10:32 AM
Very nice one on the topic of expressing love with words. I would actually be ok with lots of thoughtful showing of love . Sometimes just hearing it spoken a lot is kind of meaningless. Always was fond of the expression Actions speak louder than words.
DiMino Avatar
September 7, 2024 at 10:47 AM
Absolutely! Actions speak louder than mere words. But not to forget that, words sincerely spoken embody the latent power of action. God spoke the world into being. A living word. Words heart-fully spoken, are spiritual archetypes -- patterns behind deeds and physical bloom. What we say, with feeling, therefore, will, given time manifests in a world of physical attributes. Another example of why prayer is important. What we profoundly think, is heard by the entire Universe. Little old us. And, at some point, there will be a noticeable response.
Empress Avatar
September 7, 2024 at 9:15 AM
So true, but sometimes, different people have different ways of expressing. Its important to find out ones love language. For me my love language is words and reassurance. So for me “ i love you” and those simple things really matter more than material things or actions. Or shared moments, this is a beautiful reminder to remind loved ones, with words, that they are loved, it wont cost anything. Pleasure reading this! Sending you light always dear joe
DiMino Avatar
September 7, 2024 at 9:55 AM
Hi IE; thank you for commenting. I Love You, is sacred. Even if not understood intellectually, consciously, the heart knows its profound promise. The words will not sincerely be uttered, unless the soul of one's being is fully, eternally committed.
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