I Love Passionately

i just wanted to watch her 
to look into her eyes
to listen to her thoughts
i just wanted to inhale her entirety.

her words were soft and tender
they flowed like seeds in the wind
i had no desires that would cloud her offer
and her offer was as gentle as the morning light
as powerful as rays of sun shine,

both and the same!

like the dove that flies effortlessly
but also defends the nest
and not an eagle anywhere.

she holds an olive branch as a symbol of peace
but like the mighty oak she too holds its strength.

i love women who dare to be women
i delight in how they hold us in their heart
without them where would men be 

i love women and their sensibilities 
quiet i listen and learn
later we’ll plow the field
for now i delight on all that she brings.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/5/2014 10:36:00 PM
I found THIS grand love poem, Maurice. So I will see your new post later. Last time I checked,it was not up. gotta finally get off this computer and do those dishes. I really love this one and how you feel about women and their sensibilities. that was such a sweet way to put it. Of course, this is a fave for me!!
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