I Love Our Love

I love you every hour and every day
Our love is a goodie-to-shoes that can’t disobey
It’s also a dragon; whoever tries to slay
Will face hell with no hands to pray
I’ll love our love anytime, any day
We’ll walk on this earth with the right of way
Our love is for real lovers, no child’s play
Me and you, we are they
Who’s talk about to love this way.

I love our love, most of all I love you
Without you my heart tells lies; which is never true
I’ll hold you so close, make your heart a tattoo
Your heart can never be outdid to outdo
You love me a lot, I love you too
I love our love, how bout you?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 1/16/2012 6:58:00 PM
Congrats, Darian. Excellent. Great job. Ralph
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Date: 1/16/2012 2:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Darian
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Date: 1/16/2012 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Love Poem" contest Darian. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/15/2012 11:09:00 PM
D.B.., CONGRATULATIONS!!! thank you for your wonderful and lovely poem.. Have fun in my next contest. always your one and only~ PD.
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Date: 5/18/2011 8:48:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win in Walayee's fine contest Darian .....:)
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Date: 5/17/2011 5:03:00 PM
Great Job Darian, Congratulations on your success in Lay's contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/17/2011 11:53:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in Lay's contest Darian. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/17/2011 4:36:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of walayee, darian
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Date: 5/16/2011 4:58:00 PM
Congrats Darian on your HM in Lay's cool collaboration contest with this excellent entry luv.. enjoy your special honor tonight..
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Date: 3/24/2011 4:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured, Darian
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Date: 3/24/2011 12:54:00 PM
Absolutely terrific! A very necessary piece.
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Date: 3/21/2011 9:22:00 AM
beautiful
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Date: 3/21/2011 5:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Darian. Love, Carol
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