I Love Our Love

I love you every hour and every day
Our love is a goodie-to-shoes that can’t disobey
It’s also a dragon; whoever tries to slay
Will face hell with no hands to pray
I’ll love our love anytime, any day
We’ll walk on this earth with the right of way
Our love is for real lovers, no child’s play
Me and you, we are they
Who’s talk about to love this way.

I love our love, most of all I love you
Without you my heart tells lies; which is never true
I’ll hold you so close, make your heart a tattoo
Your heart can never be outdid to outdo
You love me a lot, I love you too
I love our love, how bout you?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Taylor Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 6:58 PM
Congrats, Darian. Excellent. Great job. Ralph
Quigley Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 2:23 PM
Congratulations on your win Darian
Brown Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 12:14 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Love Poem" contest Darian. Love, Carol
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January 15, 2012 at 11:09 PM
D.B.., CONGRATULATIONS!!! thank you for your wonderful and lovely poem.. Have fun in my next contest. always your one and only~ PD.
Fraser Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 8:48 AM
Many congratulations on your win in Walayee's fine contest Darian .....:)
Freeman Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 5:03 PM
Great Job Darian, Congratulations on your success in Lay's contest. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 11:53 AM
Congratulations on the win in Lay's contest Darian. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 4:36 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of walayee, darian
Sweetheart Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 4:58 PM
Congrats Darian on your HM in Lay's cool collaboration contest with this excellent entry luv.. enjoy your special honor tonight..
Mehta Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 4:42 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured, Darian
Tacito Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 12:54 PM
Absolutely terrific! A very necessary piece.
Doreus Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 9:22 AM
beautiful
Brown Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 5:34 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Darian. Love, Carol
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