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I Love Nature

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I love all the changes the seasons bring crisp autumn leaves or winter’s icy freeze and in the summer sun I’ll be basking Mother nature’s gifts I can hear the dawn chorus sweetly sing spiders spin threads like a shiny trapeze and tiny fledgling chicks take to the wing I adore the colors of stunning spring, pale pink sakura blossoms adorn trees bright xanthic daffodils look quite dazzling Mother nature’s gifts Writing Challenge, Feb 2019, Roundel Form Sponsored by Dear Heart 2/10/19

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Eve Roper

Date: 3/7/2019 5:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your awesome win, Jan, beautiful imagery. Hugs Eve ~`*

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2019 5:53:00 PM

thanks Eve I loved the challenge:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 3/6/2019 5:57:00 PM

Jan, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned Roundel and what a great image~

Jan Allison
Date: 3/6/2019 6:11:00 PM

thanks Constance I thoroughly enjoyed your writing challenge:-) hugs jan xx

David Drowley

Date: 3/6/2019 11:58:00 AM

Jan, Excellent write! I can feel the seasons. David :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/6/2019 6:10:00 PM

thanks so much David:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/25/2019 1:22:00 AM

This is quite lovely Jan. I plan on seeing it on the winning list! : ) xxoo

Jan Allison
Date: 3/6/2019 6:10:00 PM

thanks so much Connie:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/13/2019 6:21:00 PM

Nicely done, Jan! G.L. in the contest. :) gw

Jan Allison
Date: 2/13/2019 6:58:00 PM

thanks GW:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/12/2019 2:58:00 AM

- Described beautifully and colorful, Jan - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/12/2019 5:58:00 PM

thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 2/11/2019 10:26:00 PM

You and I were inspired by the same theme I see, Jan, love how vividly you describe the seasons!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/12/2019 2:39:00 AM

thanks Michelle the flowers in the gardens inspired me:-) hugs Jan xx

Bette Bavington

Date: 2/11/2019 7:42:00 AM

A nicely done poem. Makes me want to go out and walk to see what spring has brought.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/12/2019 2:39:00 AM

the flowers are peeping up n the garden, i love this time of year:-) hugs Jan x

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/11/2019 2:42:00 AM

Well written Jan , the beauty of nature. I've never heard of this form , Good luck. Tom.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/12/2019 2:38:00 AM

my first attempt too Tom:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/10/2019 8:03:00 PM

Very beautiful poetry Jan! I like this one!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/12/2019 2:37:00 AM

thanks my friend I surprise with the odd serious poem!:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 2/10/2019 7:55:00 PM

Your muse took off its sunglasses! Well done! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 2/12/2019 2:37:00 AM

lol thanks Rico:-) hugs Jan xx

John Hardison

Date: 2/10/2019 6:57:00 PM

Beautifully put.I do Love the thought of spring coming. Downside, if only we could somehow 'poetically' remove all allergies once and for all. Best of luck in the contest. Peace. Love and Joy.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/12/2019 2:36:00 AM

Yes many suffer with hay fever and other conditions John:-( hugs Jan xx

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 2/10/2019 6:52:00 PM

Lovely!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/12/2019 2:36:00 AM

thanks Abdullah:-) hugs Jan xx

Bobby May

Date: 2/10/2019 6:43:00 PM

That one is over the top JAN, what a wonderful description!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/12/2019 2:35:00 AM

thanks Bobby:-) hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/10/2019 4:51:00 PM

Had to "Fav" that's absolutely beautiful and I not only love Spring but, birds as well.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/12/2019 2:33:00 AM

thanks so much especially for the fave ML:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/10/2019 4:50:00 PM

Jan, this is so poetically done. Especially this part: "spiders spin threads like a shiny trapeze and tiny fledgling chicks take to the wing" Lovely!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/12/2019 2:32:00 AM

thanks Caren:-) hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/10/2019 4:25:00 PM

Oh, I love the joy that springs from your poem, Jan. Though I'm not familiar with this form, your words are beautiful and uplifting. Wishing you success in Dear Heart's contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Jan Allison
Date: 2/10/2019 4:35:00 PM

Thanks Carolyn its my first attempt at this form:-) hugs Jan xx