I Love Her Said A

I love her said A.
I despise her said B.
The others were quiet.
We knew our aunt C.

She is a marvel
if you are nice.
If you are distant,
She treats you like ice.

I adore her, said one.
I hate her said two.
She gives what she gets.
Between me and you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Baker Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 11:22 PM
I guess that's the "A, B, C's" of it. :-) All nice aunts here but I know some pretty mean one's that aren't mine.
Krutsinger Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 1:30 AM
I know some terrific ones, and some terrible ones too.
Anaya Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 6:54 PM
This Caren is an interesting concept to a new type of poem. "Caren's Said One" Poetry Contest! What do you say to make a type?
Krutsinger Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 1:30 AM
Thank you. I did try to make a couple of types, but was told they are not "taking new types", so have stopped.
Bauer Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 10:49 AM
delightfully described, caren!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 10:59 AM
Thank you Ilene.
Hankins Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 10:10 AM
I must say I never had an aunt who wasn't sweet as could be to me.
Krutsinger Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 10:59 AM
I have had two who were not nice at all.
Vangaveti Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 9:24 AM
Loved it as usual!!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 10:59 AM
Thank you Swetha
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