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I Lost My Love's Ship

The news came to me as hell On your fake ship my sails fell You broke my heart Wafted from you treason smell A demon cut the rope My feelings drowned in mope I lost my love's ship Still I have hope I will not fall down I will find my land again Draw a new map for my heart And my ship will return Heaven will send its cloud and blow its wind And each will reap what he sow at the end

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/4/2015 9:23:00 AM
A wonderful and excellent write, thanks for shared this beautiful, I enjoyed the read. Excellent...................7!............A.M.
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Date: 7/4/2015 12:08:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words dear friend
Date: 7/4/2015 7:43:00 AM
I was drawn by the title and enjoyed sailing on your ship.
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Date: 7/4/2015 12:10:00 PM
Thanks for your sweet comment dear friend
Date: 7/3/2015 4:33:00 AM
yes keep hoping!!! LAst words are true!~Olive Eloisa =)
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Date: 7/3/2015 7:53:00 PM
Sure thing cause hope is the greatest gift and one of the ones that hold us to life Thanks for dropping by and reading my writings

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