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I Look So Small From Up Here

fame,
you *****
it was you who taunted us
we walked
on razor sharp blades
of grass
gras
p
ed
at straws
covered in white dust 
inside
on the surface

on the surface
we used the word art
and crapped on it
like so much hay

hey
we did it every day
in every way

without a kiss
we fornicated 
on the carpet
where we rehearsed
our play
that was when

well

that was when

we jumped 
from the edge
from the cliff
when our bodies 
crashed into the rocks
and even a rock garden
punctures 
through
the 
layers and layers
of skin
of flesh
of tributaries
of bone
layers and layers 
of blood
of platelets
of cells
of liquid…life

landed from a hundred yards up.

it was you on my mind
and you know we didn’t die

when we jumped
from our school
from the edge
when our bodies
transcended
matter
like 
spirits
and 
spirits
was our addiction

the smoke
the pills
the blotters
the powder

you caught my eye

and we 
let our schooling
get in the way 
of our love
what we loosely 
called our art

but i did 
fall
i fell hard

the day i spiralled 
quickly
d
o
w
n
from the rock
where i stood
and you know
you were
you are
the edge

and you know
it’s you

the day
i fell

you
i fell for

and me who took the fall
from
my 
my 

my
oh
my

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/18/2014 9:43:00 AM
WOW, would love to know the story of THIS one!! Is it a first love who did all this with you? the first part of this was genius when you used the word grass followed by grasp, but cutting the word to SHOW a slippery grasp. that was so cool. You are fascinating!
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Date: 10/18/2014 9:41:00 AM
well, I don't want to view any of my contest entries yet, so I will just come see this one . I am off on my little day trip with Joe soon. Let me see what this oldie is about!!
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Date: 9/11/2014 3:34:00 PM
you are so open about everything... :) "anyways, not here either."
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