''I Longed For Love--Love Pure Like Driven Snow'' Re-Revised

I longed for love—love pure like driven snow,
untouched and virgin—in the years to come:
but years did come and go until (O woe!)
it, like the fall, decayed in my autumn.
Heartbroken, never I a princess met
or maiden girl with whom to spend long nights
of ardent love. (Alas! best to forget
my heart's too foolish hopes of its delights.)
Unstained by sin, naïve and innocent;
unspoil'd by life and vice in the very least:
I cast'd aside my youth's prurient bent,
forswore my loins' lusts and was my own priest!
     Now aged and useless, I've denied all love;
     thus life's reproach abides and won't approve.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/29/2014 8:55:00 AM
Very unique piece, congratulations.
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Date: 1/29/2014 6:35:00 AM
Wonderful poem and congrats on the fine win, Ngoc
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Date: 1/29/2014 1:51:00 AM
I like this Ngoc - how you've managed to construct a brilliant poem from a theme whose ending should in essence sprout sadness. Love strikes a hard bargain sometimes especially when it doesn't want to be found. Well penned!
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Ngoc Nguyen
Date: 1/29/2014 4:23:00 AM
Thanks, Vicky, for your praise and words of wisdom. Yours, Ngoc.
Date: 1/18/2014 9:10:00 AM
- Never stop dreaming - never stop believing in love ..... a pleasant poem to read, thank you,Ngoc :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Ngoc Nguyen
Date: 1/18/2014 10:09:00 AM
Thanks, Anne! You are a hopeless idealist in the best sense and my constant friend whose presence and words are an encouragement to me. With warmest love, Ngoc.
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