I Lifted Up

from suffering and pain
that is piped into veins
by the organ-less master
who relentlessly plays

from a congested gutter
of fake themes
hiding in deception
and callous clutter

from distaste of the old
the sick the poor and uninvited

from the self-imposed
silent deaf and short-sighted

I rise
as a bed of plume feathers
carry me gently towards
an untainted treasure

klimt gold ash pours over my body
soothing the distress I allowed to infest

I stroll along the mountains aurora
feet sinking into a bed of stardust flora
gazing out at mankind

a dull drum beat of the blinding matrix
trudging in sync to a contrived greatness

oblivious to the thundering roar 
of perishing seas

animals lie floating
in warm global soaking

smoldering sun with rusted rays
shivers in the sky
with disheartened malaise

the illusion is breaking
a decision is undertaking

a red beaked sparrow beckons me
to look off into the darkening blue

a great tempest is coming
and long overdue
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Delaney Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 3:45 PM
Your final two lines - so powerful. My mind kept saying uh huh, uh huh through the whole poem. Wonderful insight. SuZ
Krutsinger Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 4:07 AM
I love this poem, and especially this imagery you somehow put onto paper: "I stroll along the mountains aurora feet sinking into a bed of stardust flora gazing out at mankind I moan in remembrance of what I find". A WOW!
Jordan Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 4:11 PM
Caren, thanks much!!!
Robinson Jr. Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 6:42 AM
Such a GrEaT poem, Ms. Gabrielle! The uppercase/lowercase emphasis defines the trumpet keys ink movement of this lyrical poem. This poetry flows w/truth and graceful power. Aurora bright write. May love light your path in life always.
Jordan Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 1:48 PM
Hi Freddie, you are so kind and I appreciate your comments! My best Gabby
Koria Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 6:23 AM
This is a magnificent poem! Such delightful imagery here, Gabrielle.
Jordan Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 6:49 AM
Hi Jasmine, thanks!!!
Sharp Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 3:10 AM
'...the old, the sick, the poor and uninvited...' I love this line, powerful and crushing... and start to end an excellent poem.
Jordan Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 5:00 AM
Hi Lawrence, thank you for your comments! Have a beautiful day!
Michael Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 11:04 PM
Drama and artful expression overflow...Nice write Gabrielle
Jordan Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 4:00 AM
Many thanks Arturo!:)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 9:37 PM
Gabrielle that was a wonderful read! I could hear it spoken, feel it too. love it xomo
Jordan Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 3:52 AM
Maureen, thank you for the warm response. Have a great day!
Blown Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 7:20 PM
"...as a bed of plume feathers carry me gently towards...a great tempest...long overdue..." once in a while it's wake on a nightmare
Jordan Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 7:49 PM
Yes, thanks much! Have a good evening.
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