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I Let You Pass By

Golden leaves swing with breeze merrily Hearing cheery music written by your winds Enjoying beamy warmth of budding sunlight Awaiting your arrival to enter my daydream, Your sunny rays made my misty land fertile, Growing seeds I sowed into vibrant yields Swaying back and forth in graceful style Emulating movements of your smiley eyes, There I linger where you roam in my fields Asking you to become my jewel of serenity Finding comfort in presence of your allure Encouraged by your vibes emitting grandeur, Soon as my day turns into twinkling twilight Becoming my vision of our romantic setting, Your whispers are heard by the starry night Alerting me to divinity of supernal blessing, That's when you arrive, bringing lover's joy Possessing virtues of glamorous enterprise. Mesmerized by your beauty I'm hypnotized, Frozen in place speechless, I let you pass by. May 20, 2018 Placed first in late October 2018 contest by Brian Strand

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/4/2018 12:44:00 PM

Hi Vijay, been there, have the T-Shirt. Another excellent write from the pen of a master. Your words sing straight into the heart. I can relate to this piece my friend. So many times I did let love walk by. Your creativity does shine as your heart sings its love. You let love pass by. Such beautiful expressions. Love the content and the imagery. have a wonderful Sunday. your friend always....Mike.

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/27/2018 11:55:00 AM

Congrats on your top win, Vijay. Well done.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/27/2018 1:16:00 PM

Thank you Line.

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/27/2018 6:41:00 AM

Congratulations Vijay on your well deserved top placement !!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/27/2018 1:16:00 PM

Thank you Mike.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/23/2018 8:40:00 AM

My gifted friend, what a beautiful, excellently written piece! It's so amazing that we let opportunities for love pass us by. In my younger days, I was shy and didn't think some of the attractive guys would even give me a second glance. Many years later, I was surprised to learn, from a couple of them, that they had been interested in me, but afraid to tell me fearful of rejection! Best wishes and hugs. Pandita

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/27/2018 1:16:00 PM

Thank you Pandita..appreciate the comments and feedback.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/21/2018 1:42:00 PM

vijay. stunning poetry so affectionately quilled.. you really let her just pass by?.... beautiful!..huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/21/2018 4:42:00 PM

Yes--that is how it happened! Thank you nette---appreciate the kind feedback.

Arturo Michael

Date: 5/21/2018 9:32:00 AM

Not even a little kiss...it's a build up of emotions... lovely imagery...All the best Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/21/2018 4:40:00 PM

I know what you mean. Thanks Arturo..always appreciate your visit and comments.

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/21/2018 9:08:00 AM

Vijay, you such a romantic swagger. This is rich in imagery and deep expression. I hope you see her again and this time speak!! Well done!~

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/21/2018 4:40:00 PM

Thank you Mike..appreciate the kind feedback.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/21/2018 6:55:00 AM

Whispers of love creating roars of poetic grandeur my friend, Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/21/2018 7:30:00 AM

Thank you my friend..appreciate your kind words.

Yazmin Malik

Date: 5/21/2018 5:59:00 AM

Beautiful poem Vijay :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/21/2018 6:41:00 AM

Thank you Yazmin.

Winged Warrior

Date: 5/21/2018 5:45:00 AM

Very smooth and serene my friend...you are quite talented at these type of verses...beautiful write Vijay...love & light...^WW^

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/21/2018 6:41:00 AM

Thank you WW..happy to read your kind words.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/21/2018 4:48:00 AM

Wow Vijay, I read this a couple times It just pulls me right into the serenity of your words. And then the powerfulness of being frozen speechless , letting you pass by , as you wrote at the end. Well written! :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/21/2018 6:40:00 AM

Always happy to read your feedback..many thanks Heidi.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 5/21/2018 2:28:00 AM

Each stanza is celebrating and cheering your "jewel of serenity". A splendid aura of sweet romantic love.. expressive imagery.. You surprised your reader when you let your love "pass by"! A unique write and a joy to read your beauties as always. Shine dear Vijay and stay blessed.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/21/2018 6:40:00 AM

Always delighted by your feedback and kind words..many thanks Besma.

Robertina B.

Date: 5/20/2018 5:12:00 PM

Such a lovely free verse, Vijay!! It literally put me in a hypnotic state.. Bravo!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/21/2018 6:39:00 AM

Thank you for your visit..enjoyed reading your comments, Robertina.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2018 5:08:00 PM

gorgeous imagery and metaphor, Vijay. This is so poetic.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/21/2018 6:38:00 AM

Appreciate the kind words..many thanks Andrea.