Vijay Pandit Poet Free verse

I Let You Pass By

Golden leaves swing with breeze merrily
Hearing cheery music written by your winds
Enjoying beamy warmth of budding sunlight
Awaiting your arrival to enter my daydream,

Your sunny rays made my misty land fertile,
Growing seeds I sowed into vibrant yields
Swaying back and forth in graceful style
Emulating movements of your smiley eyes,

There I linger where you roam in my fields
Asking you to become my jewel of serenity
Finding comfort in presence of your allure
Encouraged by your vibes emitting grandeur,

Soon as my day turns into twinkling twilight
Becoming my vision of our romantic setting,
Your whispers are heard by the starry night
Alerting me to divinity of supernal blessing,

That's when you arrive, bringing lover's joy
Possessing virtues of glamorous enterprise.
Mesmerized by your beauty I'm hypnotized, 
Frozen in place speechless, I let you pass by.

May 20, 2018
Placed first in late October 2018 contest by Brian Strand

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Vladislav Raven November 4, 2018 at 12:44 PM Hi Vijay, been there, have the T-Shirt. Another excellent write from the pen of a master. Your words sing straight into the heart. I can relate to this piece my friend. So many times I did let love walk by. Your creativity does shine as your heart sings its love. You let love pass by. Such beautiful expressions. Love the content and the imagery. have a wonderful Sunday. your friend always....Mike.

Line Gauthier October 27, 2018 at 11:55 AM Congrats on your top win, Vijay. Well done. Vijay Pandit October 27, 2018 at 1:16 PM Thank you Line.

Mike Gentile October 27, 2018 at 6:41 AM Congratulations Vijay on your well deserved top placement !!! Vijay Pandit October 27, 2018 at 1:16 PM Thank you Mike.

Pandita Sietesantos May 23, 2018 at 8:40 AM My gifted friend, what a beautiful, excellently written piece! It's so amazing that we let opportunities for love pass us by. In my younger days, I was shy and didn't think some of the attractive guys would even give me a second glance. Many years later, I was surprised to learn, from a couple of them, that they had been interested in me, but afraid to tell me fearful of rejection! Best wishes and hugs. Pandita Vijay Pandit October 27, 2018 at 1:16 PM Thank you Pandita..appreciate the comments and feedback.

Nette Onclaud May 21, 2018 at 1:42 PM vijay. stunning poetry so affectionately quilled.. you really let her just pass by?.... beautiful!..huggs Vijay Pandit May 21, 2018 at 4:42 PM Yes--that is how it happened! Thank you nette---appreciate the kind feedback.

Arturo Michael May 21, 2018 at 9:32 AM Not even a little kiss...it's a build up of emotions... lovely imagery...All the best Vijay Vijay Pandit May 21, 2018 at 4:40 PM I know what you mean. Thanks Arturo..always appreciate your visit and comments.

Mike Gentile May 21, 2018 at 9:08 AM Vijay, you such a romantic swagger. This is rich in imagery and deep expression. I hope you see her again and this time speak!! Well done!~ Vijay Pandit May 21, 2018 at 4:40 PM Thank you Mike..appreciate the kind feedback.

Demetrios Trifiatis May 21, 2018 at 6:55 AM Whispers of love creating roars of poetic grandeur my friend, Vijay! Vijay Pandit May 21, 2018 at 7:30 AM Thank you my friend..appreciate your kind words.

Yazmin Malik May 21, 2018 at 5:59 AM Beautiful poem Vijay :) Vijay Pandit May 21, 2018 at 6:41 AM Thank you Yazmin.

Winged Warrior May 21, 2018 at 5:45 AM Very smooth and serene my friend...you are quite talented at these type of verses...beautiful write Vijay...love & light...^WW^ Vijay Pandit May 21, 2018 at 6:41 AM Thank you WW..happy to read your kind words.

Heidi Sands May 21, 2018 at 4:48 AM Wow Vijay, I read this a couple times It just pulls me right into the serenity of your words. And then the powerfulness of being frozen speechless , letting you pass by , as you wrote at the end. Well written! :) Vijay Pandit May 21, 2018 at 6:40 AM Always happy to read your feedback..many thanks Heidi.

Besma Riabi Dziri May 21, 2018 at 2:28 AM Each stanza is celebrating and cheering your "jewel of serenity". A splendid aura of sweet romantic love.. expressive imagery.. You surprised your reader when you let your love "pass by"! A unique write and a joy to read your beauties as always. Shine dear Vijay and stay blessed. Vijay Pandit May 21, 2018 at 6:40 AM Always delighted by your feedback and kind words..many thanks Besma.

Robertina B. May 20, 2018 at 5:12 PM Such a lovely free verse, Vijay!! It literally put me in a hypnotic state.. Bravo!! Vijay Pandit May 21, 2018 at 6:39 AM Thank you for your visit..enjoyed reading your comments, Robertina.

Andrea Dietrich May 20, 2018 at 5:08 PM gorgeous imagery and metaphor, Vijay. This is so poetic. Vijay Pandit May 21, 2018 at 6:38 AM Appreciate the kind words..many thanks Andrea.