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I Let You Pass By

Golden leaves swing with breeze merrily
Hearing cheery music written by your winds
Enjoying beamy warmth of budding sunlight
Awaiting your arrival to enter my daydream,

Your sunny rays made my misty land fertile,
Growing seeds I sowed into vibrant yields
Swaying back and forth in graceful style
Emulating movements of your smiley eyes,

There I linger where you roam in my fields
Asking you to become my jewel of serenity
Finding comfort in presence of your allure
Encouraged by your vibes emitting grandeur,

Soon as my day turns into twinkling twilight
Becoming my vision of our romantic setting,
Your whispers are heard by the starry night
Alerting me to divinity of supernal blessing,

That's when you arrive, bringing lover's joy
Possessing virtues of glamorous enterprise.
Mesmerized by your beauty I'm hypnotized, 
Frozen in place speechless, I let you pass by.

May 20, 2018
Placed first in late October 2018 contest by Brian Strand

Copyright © Vijay Pandit | Year Posted 2018

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Vladislav Raven Date: 11/4/2018 12:44:00 PM Hi Vijay, been there, have the T-Shirt. Another excellent write from the pen of a master. Your words sing straight into the heart. I can relate to this piece my friend. So many times I did let love walk by. Your creativity does shine as your heart sings its love. You let love pass by. Such beautiful expressions. Love the content and the imagery. have a wonderful Sunday. your friend always....Mike. Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 10/27/2018 11:55:00 AM Congrats on your top win, Vijay. Well done. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/27/2018 1:16:00 PM Thank you Line.

Mike Gentile Date: 10/27/2018 6:41:00 AM Congratulations Vijay on your well deserved top placement !!! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/27/2018 1:16:00 PM Thank you Mike.

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 5/23/2018 8:40:00 AM My gifted friend, what a beautiful, excellently written piece! It's so amazing that we let opportunities for love pass us by. In my younger days, I was shy and didn't think some of the attractive guys would even give me a second glance. Many years later, I was surprised to learn, from a couple of them, that they had been interested in me, but afraid to tell me fearful of rejection! Best wishes and hugs. Pandita Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/27/2018 1:16:00 PM Thank you Pandita..appreciate the comments and feedback.

Nette Onclaud Date: 5/21/2018 1:42:00 PM vijay. stunning poetry so affectionately quilled.. you really let her just pass by?.... beautiful!..huggs Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/21/2018 4:42:00 PM Yes--that is how it happened! Thank you nette---appreciate the kind feedback.

Arturo Michael Date: 5/21/2018 9:32:00 AM Not even a little kiss...it's a build up of emotions... lovely imagery...All the best Vijay Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/21/2018 4:40:00 PM I know what you mean. Thanks Arturo..always appreciate your visit and comments.

Mike Gentile Date: 5/21/2018 9:08:00 AM Vijay, you such a romantic swagger. This is rich in imagery and deep expression. I hope you see her again and this time speak!! Well done!~ Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/21/2018 4:40:00 PM Thank you Mike..appreciate the kind feedback.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 5/21/2018 6:55:00 AM Whispers of love creating roars of poetic grandeur my friend, Vijay! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/21/2018 7:30:00 AM Thank you my friend..appreciate your kind words.

Yazmin Malik Date: 5/21/2018 5:59:00 AM Beautiful poem Vijay :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/21/2018 6:41:00 AM Thank you Yazmin.

Winged Warrior Date: 5/21/2018 5:45:00 AM Very smooth and serene my friend...you are quite talented at these type of verses...beautiful write Vijay...love & light...^WW^ Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/21/2018 6:41:00 AM Thank you WW..happy to read your kind words.

Heidi Sands Date: 5/21/2018 4:48:00 AM Wow Vijay, I read this a couple times It just pulls me right into the serenity of your words. And then the powerfulness of being frozen speechless , letting you pass by , as you wrote at the end. Well written! :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/21/2018 6:40:00 AM Always happy to read your feedback..many thanks Heidi.

Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 5/21/2018 2:28:00 AM Each stanza is celebrating and cheering your "jewel of serenity". A splendid aura of sweet romantic love.. expressive imagery.. You surprised your reader when you let your love "pass by"! A unique write and a joy to read your beauties as always. Shine dear Vijay and stay blessed. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/21/2018 6:40:00 AM Always delighted by your feedback and kind words..many thanks Besma.

Robertina B. Date: 5/20/2018 5:12:00 PM Such a lovely free verse, Vijay!! It literally put me in a hypnotic state.. Bravo!! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/21/2018 6:39:00 AM Thank you for your visit..enjoyed reading your comments, Robertina.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/20/2018 5:08:00 PM gorgeous imagery and metaphor, Vijay. This is so poetic. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/21/2018 6:38:00 AM Appreciate the kind words..many thanks Andrea.