I Let You Go to Save Us

We stopped laughing the way we used to do,
 The “I love you’s” started feeling untrue.
 I saw the cracks before they spread too wide,
 So I broke my own heart — just to protect your side.
I watched us fade while screaming inside,
 Like drowning slow with no place to hide.
 So I shattered the world we built with care,
 Just to save the pieces still left there.
But now the silence cuts like jagged glass,
A hollow echo of a love that couldn't last.
The ghost of us haunts every empty room,
A lingering shadow of impending doom. 
I carry the weight of all we've lost,
A heavy cross, a bitter cost.
Your absence is a ache I can't erase,
A permanent ache I can’t replace. 
And in the dark, I wonder if you feel,
The ache that’s real, the wounds that heal.
Or are you gone, just a distant star,
Fading further, leaving scars? 
I wish I could undo the pain,
Unwrite the past, break free from the chain.
But love, it’s brutal, it’s raw, it’s true—
And sometimes, we just can’t make it through.
So I did what was needed to do.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Agustin Avatar
May 16, 2025 at 11:29 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Man Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 1:20 PM
I echoed your incredible poem giving the guy's side of the story.
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May 14, 2025 at 3:33 PM
Wow. I never thought that this would happen. What is it called so I can see?
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