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I Leaped

I Leaped By Dane Smith-Johnsen Saw my life indisputably clinging to a past night. Saw my hopes fall downward, as my heart lay broken. Ripped asunder like petals of a buttercup, strewn. Vanished with the wind. Saw my dreams undeniably showing in the moonlight. Saw my mind rebounding and life’s paths ricochet. Turned, I, somewhere to a place that in God I knew not. Lost in the landscape. Saw my soul distinctly crying, dying without insight. Saw my lone self-sinking in a crest’s avalanche. Plunging quickly as a geyser whose power lost might. Steaming with duty. Saw my Father understandingly reach down from above. Felt the strength of loving as He held out His hand. Leaped I safely to the bosom of His arms that day. Praying, by faith, home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/17/2009 6:14:00 PM
Lovely words to your faith Dane Ann, another lovely piece >> James
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Date: 10/10/2009 5:33:00 PM
I love your inspirational poems, as well of course all the rest, but these are inspirational. Your comments are welcome and appreciated. Yes, I know how hunters are about their dogs. I don't hunt any more, but I can sure brag about past hunts.Lol Brownie was my pride and joy as a boy and young man growing uo. God bless! Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 10/10/2009 10:53:00 AM
Awesome poem filled with hope and inspiration. When you are lost, now you know where you can turn! He's always there for us, dear friend. Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 10/10/2009 9:00:00 AM
This is filled with such wonderful faith and so beautifully written, Dane! The form is new to me. I like the way it flows. Excellent work that fills the spirit with hope! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/10/2009 6:20:00 AM
Thank God that he is a strong one with a mighty arm for if he wasn't he would collaspe under my weight(allegoric spoken and literally). I love what you have done here. Great write. Keep writing. Sara
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