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I Lay There In the Dirty Bath Water

I lay there in the dirty bath water;
unable to raise myself up, like a
dog in quicksand, I wondered if I 
should just yelp, or die, as the
grey water ran into my dream 
and eye

I must have pulled something,
a muscle, a nerve, or a bank heist,
it wasn’t clear

this must be the same as having 
a stroke, I thought;  not being able 
to use one side, a baby, a dog, waiting
for help.

And when I eventually rolled myself out, 
and the arm came back to life, I vowed 
never to bathe again, unless it was with
my wife.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/20/2015 5:11:00 PM
Cute one..Got a chuckle..I hope it wasn't anything really wrong with your health..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 3/2/2015 2:59:00 AM
Great write. I enjoyed reading it.#7
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Peter Lewis Holmes
Date: 3/2/2015 4:37:00 AM
Thanks Njeri!...peace and love...Peter

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