I, Lamenting

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I write poems I paint poem Poems dripping blood Poems deep and sad Sad and raw with emotion Sad to read and behold Behold the words Behold the sadness Sadness in bleeding poetry Sadness in my deep sorrow Sorrow that drips sadness Sorrow that flows in poetry Poetry I write of pain Poetry penned in pain Pain that stabs my heart Pain that is endless Endless until my last breathe Endless dreams that torment Torment all of my days Torment in my soul and I pray Pray for peace from above Pray that my writing will be release Release the emotion I hold within Release the flood of tears flowing Flowing words I write Flowing tears I write Write with wide-eyed innocence Write my poems truthfully Truthfully my words tell the story Truthfully I lay bare my heart Heart and soul written Heart again and again to read Read by those who honour me Read by those with kindness Kindness will be their response Kindness will dwell in their words Words that are mine Words and poems mine Mine that I gave birth to Mine that are like my beloved children Children I will ever protect Children I accept with their flaws and treasure Treasure all my poems Treasure and weep for my poesy Poesy that heals my heart and soul Poesy that I must and need to write Write with deep lamenting Write with great love Lamenting a life I must journey alone in Love buried in tombs _______________________________ May 7, 2015 Poetry/Blitz/I, Lamenting Copyright Protected, ID 05-671-035-07 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France

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Isa Mahrie

Date: 6/3/2015 12:46:00 PM

Broken, the emotion is so deep Sad yet a very powerful one, excellent composed and yes I agree a poem have a special attachment to Soul In which we honor, I,lamenting is Brilliant !

Jiril Clemons

Date: 5/24/2015 8:20:00 AM

One of the best poems I've read on this site in a while. Your description of your purpose is writing, is deeply expressed, and understandable from all others true poets. The emotions used to describe why you write, is indeed amazing. Enjoyable piece overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/10/2015 8:52:00 AM

I found this poem to be powerful and magnificently written. Poetry covers every emotion and expresses every joy, pain or imaginative thought we writers have. This gem you outdid yourself my friend! A7

Nandita Das

Date: 5/8/2015 9:23:00 AM

You write the most deeply soulful sad writes full of pain with deep passion. A very heart touching write. Deeply poignant. Incredibly beautiful. #7

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/7/2015 8:30:00 PM

I felt the blitz of your words! Very poignant, Broken. Your poetry is sad and beautiful, as you are. A compelling read. I do hope things will get better. :) Kim

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/7/2015 5:11:00 PM

Sad..Very emotive work..Creatively Presented..Thanks for the visit...Sara

David Meade

Date: 5/7/2015 12:55:00 PM

Your words touch my heart deeply . . . for pain is part of life that hints of a healing to come. Awesome my dear. 7, fav from me.