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I Know You're There

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I have my ritual. Before turning off the lights. I clear my head of the day. It’s good to rest. My bed faces the moon out my window and your photo. I talk to you; you don’t answer but I know you hear me. Wherever you are. I know you’re there. Somewhere. in the dark of night memories are all I have with you gone AP: 1st place 2021 Submitted on April 12, 2021 for contest MOMENTS OF REFLECTIONS - HAIBUN sponsored by MALABIKA RAY CHOUDHURY - RANKED 2ND

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Date: 5/11/2021 5:07:00 PM
Tugs the heart, Line, your loss is heartfelt truly ... my compliments for your win my friend, Aloha!
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Date: 5/11/2021 5:33:00 PM
Thank you very much, William. Most appreciated ~
Date: 5/11/2021 4:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love and hugs ~ Mala
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Date: 5/11/2021 5:33:00 PM
Thank you, Mala ~
Date: 4/28/2021 7:52:00 PM
So beautiful ~ he is there... love & hugs Ann xx
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Date: 4/29/2021 11:13:00 AM
Absolutely, thank you, Ann ~
Date: 4/16/2021 3:04:00 AM
Ahhh!! Emotive and expressive work. Touching. Your presence at my page is inspiriting. Sara
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Date: 4/16/2021 6:47:00 AM
Thanks, Sara ~
Date: 4/12/2021 1:15:00 PM
aww Line such a touching piece, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/12/2021 9:39:00 PM
Thanks, Jan ~
Date: 4/12/2021 12:03:00 PM
I'm not familiar with the Haibun form but the more I see of them the more I find to like. Yours I like very much. John
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Date: 4/12/2021 9:40:00 PM
Thank you very much, John. Yes the haibun is a combination of two styles, I love it ~
Date: 4/12/2021 11:57:00 AM
Hello Lin, itis good to have memories when they are good. Memories that make a person sad is best to forget. Hugs. Darlene
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Date: 4/12/2021 9:40:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene ~ much appreciated
Date: 4/12/2021 9:43:00 AM
You speak for so many of us, I too KNow my beloved is here. God bless.
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Date: 4/12/2021 9:40:00 PM
Bless you, DM ~ yes, absolutely

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