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I Know You Don'T

I could never get enough of you the way you looked sounded perfection It was new each glance was new how? I wanted to keep each moment why? My eyes kept stealing parts of you processing polaroids behind eyelids I hung them up in the darkness of my dreams stars that gathered almost forming day Every day I wanted more I was addicted you I wanted it all everything mine I stared and stared and stared it stung Your beautiful eyes your tempting lips your laugh, your voice, your presence you. I loved it all I loved you I love you. Do you love me?

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/19/2013 1:57:00 PM

Hello Timing, . Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your pen is looking for. If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda

Skat A

Date: 6/19/2013 8:21:00 AM

Hi Timing, i love the poet name you have chosen. a nice and sweet poem.. and I hope the answer is YES, to your question., Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/19/2013 5:25:00 AM

Hey, Timing! - Pleased to read your first poem in the P-Soup! - You write very well. - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and words here with us :) - Here it is: give to get, comments - then you will get feedback on your writing - I love get feedback on what I write. - Wish you luck my "new friend" - Have fun with poetry! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)