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I Know a Place

Between frosty cobalt-cliffs, cruise-ship hesitates to pause, Amidst ice sculptures echoing cheers of spirited applause, Mesmerizing enthralled sights evincing awe-struck trance, Lauding vast gelid expanse, hypnotizing eyes of romance. Buoying on inlets, flaunting aesthetics of sculpted designs, Dark blue glaciers rise for miles, as our ship gently aligns, Watching seals resting lazily, ruminating on blocks of ice, Empathetic of frightened sparrow decrying the crowd-size. Gracefully ship circles around, as if staging a festive dance, When in enamored glance, caressing hints of romance, We praise motifs on water~ floating white cotton balls, Where shards chromatic fall from frozen-tall bluish walls. Miles of crystals adorning yonder, glinting cerulean blue, Stack mounds of white contrast on distant emerald hue, As Glacier Bay begins to fade retreating in rearward view, When ship's whistle blows aloud, bidding a fond adieu. A journey we treasure now in albums of cherished past, Where moments unsurpassed, coveting-forever last, Embracing precious memories evoking paradise on earth, Glamorizing place-idyllic, luxuriating in cadence of mirth. May 28, 2023 Placed 1st: This or That, Vol 18 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh Title Chosen: I Know A Place Glacier Bay National Park and Preserve lies west of Juneau, Alaska and can only be reached by plane or boat. Glacier Bay was declared a UNESCO WORLD HERITAGE SITE in 1979 for the spectacular glacier and icefield landscapes.

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Ink Empress

Date: 10/13/2023 5:50:00 AM

I can see why this was placed first dear Vijay! Your way words is truly unique and very creative! I love reading your poems and this one is beyond excellent with descriptive diction and flow of rhymes so well articulated and delivered, i especially love “ Gracefully ship circles around, as if staging a festive dance,“ wow! Just so creative! “ A journey we treasure now in albums of cherished past,“ use of colors too and gems and the depth of whats conveyed truly makes this an impeccable write

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/1/2023 1:50:00 PM

I found your poem mesmerizing; reading it created a desire to take an Alaskan cruise. I'd like to see those cobalt cliffs, those icicles, those seals resting lazily. Your poem made me feel as if I was there. Your imagery is vivid and engaging about the 'paradise on earth.' Well done! Sara

Curie Stark

Date: 8/19/2023 3:15:00 AM

Truly Mesmerizing

The Situation

Date: 8/6/2023 4:01:00 PM

I can count on you when it comes to rhyming. I give you compliments because you deserve them. While struggling what to say to others who don't even try to rhyme. Your pen is surely a paint brush of where you were blessed to visit.

Judy Ball

Date: 6/22/2023 10:48:00 PM

I have heard of those cruise ships that go to places like that where you can see huge glaciers and watch whales in icy waters. Never been on one myself but it looks lovely. Nice job here. Good luck in the contest. God Bless. JB

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2023 1:02:00 PM

what a beautiful place this is. Has this contest been judged yet? I bet it does super well.

Judy Ball

Date: 6/15/2023 8:42:00 AM

My daughter and son-in-law love to go on a cruise about once a year. They are making memories to shar in their old age. Beautiful write Vijay. God Bless, JB

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/16/2023 6:02:00 AM

Thank you Judy--much appreciate.

Valsa George

Date: 6/13/2023 9:55:00 AM

Once again back to your beautiful poem with Congratulations on your first place win dear Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/16/2023 6:02:00 AM

Thank you Valsa--much appreciate.

Michael Tor

Date: 6/12/2023 11:12:00 AM

Vijay this place has taken a foothold of your soul. Your words reflet the beauty and scenery, and emotional love you experienced. Sharing magical words to reflect its presence. Another favorite...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/16/2023 6:01:00 AM

You are so very kind my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks and your FAVE. Many thanks, Michael.

Terry Miller

Date: 6/12/2023 1:10:00 AM

Striking imagery, congratulations

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/16/2023 6:00:00 AM

Thank you Terry--much appreciate.

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/11/2023 5:16:00 PM

Dear Vijay, it is with great pleasure that I'm back to extend my heartfelt congratulations on your top contest win in the contest. Your work is truly touching, and I wish you all the best in your future endeavors. Sincerely,

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/16/2023 6:00:00 AM

Thank you, Lasaad. Much appreciate.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/11/2023 4:35:00 PM

Ahh!! So well described in these lines and I can also feel the emotion of being there and enjoying something awesome in nature. I am glad you got to go there and are now sharing your experience with us. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Sara

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/16/2023 6:00:00 AM

Thank you Sara--much appreciate.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 6/11/2023 4:24:00 PM

Strikingly picturesque, gorgeous penning, Vijay:-) I hope to someday visit Alaska. Heartiest congratulations on your top win!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/16/2023 5:59:00 AM

Much appreciate, Edward. Many thanks for sponsoring contest and your kind remarks.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/8/2023 3:00:00 PM

Hello Vijay , You were on an Alaska Wow! I hope you had a lovely time. cruise! I have never seen a blue glaciers. It sounds so pretty when the sun shines on it. Enjoyed this poem. Enjoy your devening my friend./Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/16/2023 10:08:00 AM

Hello Vijay , I am glad you had a great time. You are welcome my friend. Enjoy your day. /Darlene\

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/16/2023 5:59:00 AM

Much appreciate my friend. Yes--we had a great time. Many thanks, as always, Darlene.

Jay Narain

Date: 6/8/2023 12:08:00 PM

I thought you were on Alaska cruise. Your depiction of Glacier bay National park is a gem. I hope the icebergs stay for decades. Nicely penned.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/16/2023 5:58:00 AM

Thank you Jay--much appreciate.

Joseph May

Date: 6/6/2023 8:07:00 AM

Wonderful write Vijay, Beautiful scenery that lives on in memory

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/6/2023 8:18:00 AM

Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/6/2023 4:18:00 AM

Vijay, your words do indeed portray a place one could dream about! Your imagery is incredible as always!! Happy Tuesday!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/6/2023 8:17:00 AM

Thank you Mike--much appreciate.

Sally Eslinger

Date: 6/6/2023 4:18:00 AM

Vijay, i am gloriously touched by your description’ masterful phrasing of the divine sights you witnessed on your tour. It is a tour i long for, but shall never take in person, so your resounding lines did carry me along into memories i can imagine i was actually had! From blue glaciers to lazy seals! Magnifico! hugs!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/6/2023 8:17:00 AM

Thank you Sally for your glowing feedback. Much appreciate your insightful thoughts.

Bill Baker

Date: 6/5/2023 4:22:00 PM

Makes me want to take a cruise to Alaska and Glacier Bay, Vijay. Loved you imagery and description. They were enchanting to imagine. Thanks for sharing their beauty with us my friend. Bill

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/6/2023 8:16:00 AM

Thank you my friend. Appreciate your visit and kind feedback.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/5/2023 7:00:00 AM

- Sounds like a beautiful place, Vijay... wish I was there... described through your eyes so wonderfully - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/6/2023 8:16:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise. Always a joy when you visit.

David Mchattie

Date: 6/4/2023 5:00:00 AM

Sounds like you enjoyed the cruise. The north is truly nature's wonder. Have a great day.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/6/2023 8:15:00 AM

Many thanks for stopping by, David. Much appreciate.

The Situation

Date: 6/3/2023 1:31:00 PM

Takes time to sit and think of words that fit. But I have discovered it's a gift or a spirit helping guide the words in place. Good work.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/6/2023 8:15:00 AM

Much appreciate your visit and comments--many thanks.

Charles Messina

Date: 6/2/2023 5:05:00 AM

Wonderful and exquisite poetry, Vijay. Now I don't have to go there, you described it perfectly (lol). Still want to see it though. Best wishes in the contest :) Charlie

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/2/2023 5:24:00 AM

Glad to see you again, Charlie. Much appreciate your kind remarks my friend. Many thanks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/1/2023 1:38:00 PM

Wow. Now, this is brilliant writing and stunning description! I have to save it as a FAVE. I loved the first stanza that pulled me in to the rest of the beauty. Thanks for sharing! :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/2/2023 5:23:00 AM

So wonderful to hear that from you, Heidi. Many thanks for your heartfelt feedback, my friend. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/30/2023 7:54:00 AM

WoW! Vijay, What a breathtaking description. I felt like I was there too. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/2/2023 5:22:00 AM

Glad you liked the poem my friend. Much appreciate your kind feedback, Alexis. Many thanks.