I Know a Place

Between frosty cobalt-cliffs, cruise-ship hesitates to pause,
Amidst ice sculptures echoing cheers of spirited applause,
Mesmerizing enthralled sights evincing awe-struck trance,
Lauding vast gelid expanse, hypnotizing eyes of romance.

Buoying on inlets, flaunting aesthetics of sculpted designs,
Dark blue glaciers rise for miles, as our ship gently aligns,
Watching seals resting lazily, ruminating on blocks of ice,
Empathetic of frightened sparrow decrying the crowd-size.

Gracefully ship circles around, as if staging a festive dance,
When in enamored glance, caressing hints of romance,
We praise motifs on water~ floating white cotton balls,
Where shards chromatic fall from frozen-tall bluish walls.

Miles of crystals adorning yonder, glinting cerulean blue,
Stack mounds of white contrast on distant emerald hue,
As Glacier Bay begins to fade retreating in rearward view,
When ship's whistle blows aloud, bidding a fond adieu.

A journey we treasure now in albums of cherished past,
Where moments unsurpassed, coveting-forever last,
Embracing precious memories evoking paradise on earth,
Glamorizing place-idyllic, luxuriating in cadence of mirth.

May 28, 2023
Placed 1st: This or That, Vol 18 Poetry Contest	
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Title Chosen: I Know A Place

Glacier Bay National Park and Preserve lies west of Juneau, Alaska and can only be reached by plane or boat. Glacier Bay was declared a UNESCO WORLD HERITAGE SITE in 1979 for the spectacular glacier and icefield landscapes.
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Empress Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 5:50 AM
I can see why this was placed first dear Vijay! Your way words is truly unique and very creative! I love reading your poems and this one is beyond excellent with descriptive diction and flow of rhymes so well articulated and delivered, i especially love “ Gracefully ship circles around, as if staging a festive dance,“ wow! Just so creative! “ A journey we treasure now in albums of cherished past,“ use of colors too and gems and the depth of whats conveyed truly makes this an impeccable write
Stark Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 3:15 AM
Truly Mesmerizing
Situation Avatar
August 6, 2023 at 4:01 PM
I can count on you when it comes to rhyming. I give you compliments because you deserve them. While struggling what to say to others who don't even try to rhyme. Your pen is surely a paint brush of where you were blessed to visit.
Ball Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 10:48 PM
I have heard of those cruise ships that go to places like that where you can see huge glaciers and watch whales in icy waters. Never been on one myself but it looks lovely. Nice job here. Good luck in the contest. God Bless. JB
Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 1:02 PM
what a beautiful place this is. Has this contest been judged yet? I bet it does super well.
Ball Avatar
June 15, 2023 at 8:42 AM
My daughter and son-in-law love to go on a cruise about once a year. They are making memories to shar in their old age. Beautiful write Vijay. God Bless, JB
Pandit Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 6:02 AM
Thank you Judy--much appreciate.
George Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 9:55 AM
Once again back to your beautiful poem with Congratulations on your first place win dear Vijay!
Pandit Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 6:02 AM
Thank you Valsa--much appreciate.
Tor Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 11:12 AM
Vijay this place has taken a foothold of your soul. Your words reflet the beauty and scenery, and emotional love you experienced. Sharing magical words to reflect its presence. Another favorite...
Pandit Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 6:01 AM
You are so very kind my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks and your FAVE. Many thanks, Michael.
Miller Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 1:10 AM
Striking imagery, congratulations
Pandit Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 6:00 AM
Thank you Terry--much appreciate.
Poet Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 5:16 PM
Dear Vijay, it is with great pleasure that I'm back to extend my heartfelt congratulations on your top contest win in the contest. Your work is truly touching, and I wish you all the best in your future endeavors. Sincerely,
Pandit Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 6:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad. Much appreciate.
Kendrick Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 4:35 PM
Ahh!! So well described in these lines and I can also feel the emotion of being there and enjoying something awesome in nature. I am glad you got to go there and are now sharing your experience with us. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Sara
Pandit Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 6:00 AM
Thank you Sara--much appreciate.
Ibeh Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 4:24 PM
Strikingly picturesque, gorgeous penning, Vijay:-) I hope to someday visit Alaska. Heartiest congratulations on your top win!
Pandit Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 5:59 AM
Much appreciate, Edward. Many thanks for sponsoring contest and your kind remarks.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 3:00 PM
Hello Vijay , You were on an Alaska Wow! I hope you had a lovely time. cruise! I have never seen a blue glaciers. It sounds so pretty when the sun shines on it. Enjoyed this poem. Enjoy your devening my friend./Darlene\
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 10:08 AM
Hello Vijay , I am glad you had a great time. You are welcome my friend. Enjoy your day. /Darlene\
Pandit Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 5:59 AM
Much appreciate my friend. Yes--we had a great time. Many thanks, as always, Darlene.
Narain Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 12:08 PM
I thought you were on Alaska cruise. Your depiction of Glacier bay National park is a gem. I hope the icebergs stay for decades. Nicely penned.
Pandit Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 5:58 AM
Thank you Jay--much appreciate.
May Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 8:07 AM
Wonderful write Vijay, Beautiful scenery that lives on in memory
Pandit Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 8:18 AM
Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.
Gentile Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 4:18 AM
Vijay, your words do indeed portray a place one could dream about! Your imagery is incredible as always!! Happy Tuesday!
Pandit Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 8:17 AM
Thank you Mike--much appreciate.
Eslinger Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 4:18 AM
Vijay, i am gloriously touched by your description’ masterful phrasing of the divine sights you witnessed on your tour. It is a tour i long for, but shall never take in person, so your resounding lines did carry me along into memories i can imagine i was actually had! From blue glaciers to lazy seals! Magnifico! hugs!
Pandit Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 8:17 AM
Thank you Sally for your glowing feedback. Much appreciate your insightful thoughts.
Baker Avatar
June 5, 2023 at 4:22 PM
Makes me want to take a cruise to Alaska and Glacier Bay, Vijay. Loved you imagery and description. They were enchanting to imagine. Thanks for sharing their beauty with us my friend. Bill
Pandit Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 8:16 AM
Thank you my friend. Appreciate your visit and kind feedback.
Andresen Avatar
June 5, 2023 at 7:00 AM
- Sounds like a beautiful place, Vijay... wish I was there... described through your eyes so wonderfully - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Pandit Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 8:16 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. Always a joy when you visit.
Mchattie Avatar
June 4, 2023 at 5:00 AM
Sounds like you enjoyed the cruise. The north is truly nature's wonder. Have a great day.
Pandit Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 8:15 AM
Many thanks for stopping by, David. Much appreciate.
Situation Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 1:31 PM
Takes time to sit and think of words that fit. But I have discovered it's a gift or a spirit helping guide the words in place. Good work.
Pandit Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 8:15 AM
Much appreciate your visit and comments--many thanks.
Messina Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 5:05 AM
Wonderful and exquisite poetry, Vijay. Now I don't have to go there, you described it perfectly (lol). Still want to see it though. Best wishes in the contest :) Charlie
Pandit Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 5:24 AM
Glad to see you again, Charlie. Much appreciate your kind remarks my friend. Many thanks.
Sands Avatar
June 1, 2023 at 1:38 PM
Wow. Now, this is brilliant writing and stunning description! I have to save it as a FAVE. I loved the first stanza that pulled me in to the rest of the beauty. Thanks for sharing! :)
Pandit Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 5:23 AM
So wonderful to hear that from you, Heidi. Many thanks for your heartfelt feedback, my friend. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.
Y. Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 7:54 AM
WoW! Vijay, What a breathtaking description. I felt like I was there too. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Pandit Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 5:22 AM
Glad you liked the poem my friend. Much appreciate your kind feedback, Alexis. Many thanks.
Kannan Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 6:11 AM
"Miles of crystals adorning yonder, glinting cerulean blue, Stack mounds of white contrast on distant emerald hue" What a beautiful imagery and just loved the contrast colors you mentioned!!!! How beautiful it would be to discern this!!! I could of course see those through your descriptive words... This is an absolutely beautiful poetry and it deserves the win!!!
Pandit Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 5:21 AM
Glad to see you again Supraja. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks for your glowing feedback.
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