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I Know a Place

I know the land where the lemon trees flower. Where bees are buzzing hour after hour. And on the air a sweet scent floats With promise of fruits by nature rote Through peaceful fields winds a path to this place Where branches of trees overhead interlace Blue sky and clouds weave magical eaves. Full of birdsong and fluttering leaves We can meet in the land where the lemon trees flower And we’ll be together hour after hour. Under the scented blossom tree bowers In a place that is truly, blissfully ours. 8/21/18 Pretty Poem Please Contest Sponsored by Julia Ward 5th.Place

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Date: 5/31/2021 7:15:00 AM
Magical ~ love the flow
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Date: 8/9/2019 3:36:00 PM
Visual imagery that you create of this place is wonderful. Hope you found it
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Date: 3/12/2019 5:38:00 PM
G'day Suzanne … a very peaceful and calming verse Suzanne. Enjoyed your verse - Lindsay
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Date: 12/11/2018 5:45:00 AM
Super spectacular poem
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Date: 10/28/2018 9:44:00 AM
Hi Suzanne, this is such a wonderful piece of poetry, The words just sing to me. Much belated congratulations on your win. You create such a beautiful scene, your wonderful words painting ba living canvas that one could just walk into. This poem fills me with peace. Have a wonderful Sunday. Highs....Mike. XX. A fave.
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Date: 8/17/2018 5:32:00 AM
Gracious, lovely poem! =) Brought a smile on mu face. Really uplifting and passionately written.
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Date: 8/2/2018 5:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. :)
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Date: 8/2/2018 4:33:00 AM
A place I’d love to be! Congrats, Suzanne!
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Date: 8/2/2018 3:50:00 AM
Congratulations, Suzanne on your win with such a beautiful lyric.
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Date: 7/22/2018 1:08:00 AM
Lovely piece, lovely place, Suzy D. Will do well, I'm sure. Viv x
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Date: 7/21/2018 6:20:00 PM
A dream of a poem SuZ! I hope this beauty takes top honors! I hope you are well my friend and that the weather is not causing havoc? I think about you everytime I watch the weather news. Hugs, Connie xxoo
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Date: 7/21/2018 12:02:00 PM
Beautiful rhythm and tone..a nice place you portrayed.. enjoyed reading your poem SuZ..best for a win.
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Date: 7/21/2018 10:27:00 AM
Great entry Suzanne, my very best wishes in the contest...
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Date: 7/21/2018 9:56:00 AM
Lovely, SuZ. Well penned.
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Date: 7/21/2018 9:47:00 AM
Lovely poem, SuZ. I do love that lemon smell. Sounds like a wonderful place for a rendezvous. Good luck!
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Date: 7/21/2018 8:35:00 AM
This is beautiful Suzanne, sounds like a place I’d like to be. Lovely poetry so enjoyable. Best wishes for a win. Warmest wishes.. ~ Susan
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 7/21/2018 8:37:00 AM
Thanks so much for reading, Susan: Glad you enjoyed. Hugs, SuZ
Date: 7/21/2018 7:48:00 AM
As I was reading this I thought it would be a good entry to the pretty poem contest. It is pretty, best of luck to you :)
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 7/21/2018 8:36:00 AM
Hi Casara: I did write it from that prompt. I will go and enter it now. Thanks for the good wishes. SuZ

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