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I Knew This Girl Once

She is beautiful She has this smile Stuck on her face I've never seen that smile I can't explain it Unless i'm yelling agaisnt the world I love her More than atoms The ones sticking to the roof of my mouth That dipps into her mouth When she lets me breath into her She's dark and brooded Yet sings of sunlight and syrup frayed and magled blonde hair Swaying against Her wide eyed-blue eyed brow She let me kiss her eyes once I never recovered fully I'm still bleeding insilin She is beautiful And I can die knowing i loved her once.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/28/2010 4:51:00 PM
She sounds wonderful... and u seem smitten with her.. your poem is very creative in its expression of emotions.. enjoyed this happy weekend..with luv..
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Date: 8/28/2010 12:59:00 PM
very moving and sweet at the end enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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