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I Kept Writing

The bushes moved closer to see what I was writing. I could feel them peering over my shoulder. One of them lost a baby leaf that slid down my back. It tickled, but I dared not move, knowing they would leave. I smiled at the shade they were giving me. Three bushes I had planted myself years ago. As magical as the enchanted trees in my forest. Many of them I had also planted. Let’s give her room, one whispered, Realizing I was on to them. I kept writing, pretending they were not alive

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Date: 7/11/2019 7:53:00 AM
i missed your writing Mama.... i looooove it." One of them lost a baby leaf that slid down my back. It tickled, but I dared not move, knowing they would leave. "something we experience but never think of expressing.... beautiful indeed
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/11/2019 11:55:00 PM
Thank you so much. I usually sit outside to write and things are always either sliding down my back, floating down my back or crawling up my legs and arms.
Date: 7/8/2019 8:03:00 PM
So imaginative and creative, Caren. I really like how the bushes interacted with you. It seemed so real! :) gw
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/8/2019 10:58:00 PM
It WAS real; as real as anything I usually write. Snicker. Snicker.
Date: 7/8/2019 2:31:00 PM
i love the very unique way your mind works, caren...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/8/2019 3:41:00 PM
Thank you Ilene. I am trying to make up for lost time. I lost a month.
Date: 7/7/2019 11:38:00 PM
Lovely, Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/8/2019 3:41:00 PM
Thank you Line. It was fun when the ending line bit me.

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