I Just Had a Few Drinks

I just had 
a few drinks
raindrops
on the glass
teardrops on the window
and two teary eyes
we had our moments
we had 
and some fights
that's how we found out
together
apart...

I had a few drinks
i saw your eyes
a few teardrops
and i'm totally drunk...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Andresen Avatar
February 14, 2012 at 4:31 AM
Next time take a appeljuce. - oxox love Anne-Lise - like the poem Dino...:)
Pettit Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 7:56 PM
Always stay in control by knowing how much you can safely take in. Good easy to read piece with decent descriptiveness.
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